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animeaddict39513 β€” The Suicidal Girl

Published: 2013-09-10 01:42:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1502; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description She has nothing left to live for,
So she confides in her knife.
With only one swift move of the blade,
She can take her own life.
She cries alone in her room at night,
Hoping that someone will hear.
Yet she gets asked everyday,
"Who would love a suicidal girl, my dear?"
She's given up,and lost her light.
The poor girl may never regain her will to fight.
She sits in the dark, as she cries her last goodbyes
Thinking of all of the peaceful ways that everyone else will die.
As tears, and blood, stain her arms she drops the blade.
The door swings open, and a figure rushes to her aid.
The figure looks at the wounds, they can't be cured with a band aid.
She'll live through it, they have enough time.
But first the figure yell, with a certain chime,.
"Don't you ever scare me like that again!"
As tears fell to the floor, from both, and then...
The words were spoken, and truly meant.
"I love the suicidal girl, with all of my heart.
If you were to die, my world would crumble apart,
And my life would be bent."
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Comments: 14

MidnightWings20 [2016-12-20 06:04:36 +0000 UTC]

You can't put suicide in words better than this.. Good job

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angelthompson [2014-08-17 03:05:34 +0000 UTC]

I can't even begin to explain how i feel after reading this, I almost cried...

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animeaddict39513 In reply to angelthompson [2014-08-18 05:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It was an extremely emotional poem for me to write now that I think about it.

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khloew2000 [2014-03-02 22:44:02 +0000 UTC]

That's so beautiful Β 

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animeaddict39513 In reply to khloew2000 [2014-03-04 00:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you lovie!

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xXChemical-KittenXx [2013-09-10 01:51:20 +0000 UTC]

This is. So. Fucking. Strong. Β I can't even asdfghjkl;

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animeaddict39513 In reply to xXChemical-KittenXx [2013-09-12 00:17:15 +0000 UTC]

I take that as you like it. I'm glad, I've been enjoying, and writing a lot of poetry lately, and this one is my favourite.

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xXChemical-KittenXx In reply to animeaddict39513 [2013-09-12 00:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Mine too ^^

You have true talent, I envy it

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animeaddict39513 In reply to xXChemical-KittenXx [2013-09-12 01:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you lovie!!! It honestly was only some drabble and idea, but I have personal expirience with these situations.

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xXChemical-KittenXx In reply to animeaddict39513 [2013-09-12 02:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

Aww I'm sorry to hear D:

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animeaddict39513 In reply to xXChemical-KittenXx [2013-09-12 02:21:28 +0000 UTC]

There's nothing to be sorry about We all have to die eventually, some ways more tragic than others.

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xXChemical-KittenXx In reply to animeaddict39513 [2013-09-12 02:23:02 +0000 UTC]

True, but it's sad to someone's life being cut shortΒ 

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animeaddict39513 In reply to xXChemical-KittenXx [2013-09-12 02:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, but there was nothing I could have done to stop it, but if I ever see the person who caused it, I won't lash out with violence (even though I'd really like to) I will use my words, and manipulate their feelings.That's what I love about words, change a couple in a sentence, and you can grasp someone's emotions.

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xXChemical-KittenXx In reply to animeaddict39513 [2013-09-12 02:40:28 +0000 UTC]

That is very true, it's good to approach someone calmly.

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