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StrawberryKoala [2005-11-26 17:04:14 +0000 UTC]

First of all, I would like to congratulate you on the copout of cutting off the image right where you would have to draw hands. Good job really stretching your limits and trying your best! A true artist.

First of all, work on line quality. The scrappy, rough, can’t-draw-a-line-to-save-my-life crap isn't attractive. It looks messy, and even most sketches from half-competent people have somewhat decent line quality. The lines aren't even one color- it just further emphasizes that you just did this drunk, after a rousing (and tiring) session of cheap hentai, instead of actually not sucking. At least this is what I hope - it'd be crushing to know people who claim to try have such little talent in their everyday lives.

Light source is again an issue. Why does light from the upper right on her shirt shift to light more from the straight right on her pants? What's with the illumination on the face and left arm, wouldn't the gigantic breasts or hair catch that light? It's almost as if you try crappy 'cel-shading" as a cheap farce of actual shading.

Ignoring the face, which is simply beyond repair, her neck angles out incorrectly and is too long or else her head is attached wrong. Remember that a neck has to extend to the base of the skull to attach, not just to the bottom of the face.

Everything on her body is too narrow, especially the shoulders and hips. That's why her breasts touch constantly, when in real life, few girls are 24-F. A pair of tits are NOT supposed to be wider than the entire chest! Also, the breasts are way too high again. Why do they suddenly emerge from the collarbone? Perhaps it is time to move out of 4-chan into Abby Winters or Playboy so you can ascertain what real women at least sort of look like.

Her arms are too short and stubby. In the picture, her wrists seem to end near the crotch, but she's leaning. In real life, women's wrists end near their crotch when they stand straight. In addition arms, in most any person, are not perfectly straight and equally thick all the way down.

Where does that purple triangle on the left of her head even come from? What is it?

Now, concerning clothes... I'm not quite sure if you've seen the light of day in the last 3 years, but nobody wears clothes like that at all. A butchered turtleneck under a halter top? Pants that fully rise to cover the hips? What? Your shirt/halter especially doesn't make sense, unless it's cut to have a triangle of cloth protruding from the bottom front, as it's shorter on the sides than on the front, no drapery on the sides indicate otherwise. I was also unaware that girl's pockets are almost completely to the sides and not in the front at all, no sir-ee. On a final clothing-related note, why does her butchered turtleneck also have a chunk cut out of the sleeve? What would the point of that be? In your other pictures of this awful character, there are somewhat normal clothes – why not this one?

Again, maybe you should at the very least sexily post in front of a mirror to see where things should be. Better yet – learn how the body is actually put together and use knowledge AND reference instead of vague guesswork that has consistently failed you.

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Sick-little-Wolfboy [2005-11-09 18:05:13 +0000 UTC]

I have GOT to do fanart of her man!

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