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Published: 2006-08-09 23:47:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 9965; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 15
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kinja is found in the water Kanoa knowing that Moesto is a great swimer sends him in to retreave kinja.Blackthorn and Bryce are still at it yawn i know same thing every time but the fight ends in the next page!but im not tellin ya how
naaa naa naa nacharicters belong to me!
see my cool lil stamp on the top corner its hard to see but its a wolf with the word ..freak23.. under it!neat ehh
PLEASE COMENT OR CRITIC!
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i love this page! hey, i saw this part on you tube! omg!8D
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Oh my gwad, awesome!!I have always liked these comics, i first saw it on youtube, I like Blackthorns Flawed Design 
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did blackThorn bite off bryce's tail?KOOL!LOVE THE VIOLENCE!!!
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I can't wait until this comic gets published!I want a copy!
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O.O This is like the Youtube video you made, awesome!
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I wonder how everyone knows about Kinja, he must be pretty well known for being a half-breed..
Why do I have the feeling this battle is going to end badly? .o.
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actuly yeah i got a realy good tuturial from shes great with back ground artest,and also works with
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I have seen them, there are great
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nice comic
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MY GOD WOMAN.
You have improved like CRAZY. O_O
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Creative plot, nice blood effects. Looking through your gallery, I see a lot of improvement from your earlier deviations. Keep up the great work!
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MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENDS!! Aamzing detail and fantastic suspence!
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I love the ACTION!
Oooo your comic is so exciting and well drawn ^ ^
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HOW DARE YOU CURSE HER ARTWORK! I WILL DESTROY YOU
just kidding, but still, DON'T CURSE HER BEAUTIFUL ARTWORK
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Wouldn't it be considered a compliment? Also, I was talking about the story.
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oh sorry, i thought you ment she was totaly copying it, and I dont think that is a complament, sorry if i was being mean
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I read your whole comic and it's very good. It's very fun watching you constantly improve.
The only thing that's suffering is your spelling and grammar. You may want to download or buy a program like Microsoft Works, but most computer's automatically have a processing program. So if yours has one, you should use it. I use one for Blood Curse too.
I thought you would like some help, because one time I made a spelling error on one of the pages and no one told me about it. I just happened to be looking at it and noticed.
This page isn't so bad compared to some of the others. There are only a few errors.
"Do yourself a favor, give up!" ['yourself' is one word; the comma is there to show a slight pause, because it would sound weird if he said that all at once. Most people pause every once in a while when they are talking, and so do anthopomorphic animals]
"You're too weak to fight!" ['too' - as well, more than desirable, extremely, very, indeed; 'to'- indicates direction, indicates position, forms infinitive, indicates purpose, indicates recipient, indicates direction of feeling or action, indicates attachments, until, indicates range, etc;]
I decided I'd stop that too/to thing before it got to long. As I said before, you're grammar has greatly improved on the last few pages. Good grammar makes comics easier to read. Also, I'm not sure what program you are using, but you should center align the text to make your speech bubbles smaller. Smaller speech bubbles are better in the case of comics.
If you ever need help with anything, ask me or ~TawnyKunyan . Especially Tawny if you need grammar help. She's a grammar nerd and is probably the only reason I feel good spelling and grammar is important also.
Sorry for making that so long...O.o
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yea ive hade many commints on that its like my art abilety takes away my grammer abilty see im doing it aging ROAR......well recently ive been using a online spellcheck and its helped out a bit but thanks for the tip
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^_^ The best way to learn how to spell better is to try your best when you're just typing too. Versus 'l33t' speak, which luckily I've never seen you do. If you 'l33t' spoke you might have serious issues writing a comic. O.o It's a terrible habit to get into and I have a heck of a time talking to people who type like that.
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Great effects with the blood!!! 
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This is getting realy realy good!
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id have to say the hadest part was making the rain fall away from the veiw 
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lol, yeah I know the feeling. It's dificult to do those back grounds. It seriously takes forever for me to do. Its prolly the most time consuming part. :/ Wow you have realy been cranking out those pages lately, I'm impressed. Keep up the awesem work.
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Totally awesome; I love all the action, such a brilliant plot! 
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Wow thats so cool i can't wait for then next one OMG you rock
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