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anmshane — Two Cents Left
Published: 2005-10-08 06:56:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Two Cents LeftThat’s it, I’m out.
I’ve blown the pocket
Full of change,
My quarters are all gone.
The screen will flash my name,
But not for very long.
I tried with all my lust,
My wits and looks and all,
But here I stand
With an empty hand.
All on my own,
Time to leave the mall.
- By Shave Mang
Oct 2005
Comments: 5
Is this about purposelessness? Or just a normal day at the mall lacking of some spare change? Either way it was a delightful read.
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As always interpretation is up to the reader. But I'd like to think of it as a feeling that can apply to almost any situation.
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first off.. i like how you left the sketchy lines in on the picture. my (non existent)heart goes out to the little guy. secondly.. this proves that you don't need to be lengthy/preachy to be good. though i feel like im missing something from the beginning, and that it just jumps right to It.
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Aww.. poor heartless Lyd. Well, thanks. I was going for the short, sweet, to the point knid of writing in this one. I dont know if its a good or bad thing but I like how it just dives right in, and leaves the reader wondering. Or, not. whatever.
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