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ann13angel — Alice in the country of Underland

Published: 2011-12-21 12:26:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1442; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 23
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Description Welcome to Underland, Alice...
You should not had let your curiosity lead you and now instead of enjoying Wonderland's heavenly pleasures, your are now force to accept the reality that the purgatorial Underland will bring upon you....

The game in Underland operates differently from Wonderland...

In wonderland, where time does not matter, there are tea parties, people who love you and you can live the utter bliss of ignorance in the world you dream of...

But in underland.... the land of the blood red day and the black ink night....

there are no joyful tea parties as you hope they are, people will still love you because they can use you for there own sick entertainment, you will relive your memories from your real self even if it rips your little heart to pieces....

once you enter, alice, you can never "wake up" or escape until you realize and atone for your sins..... be responsible for your own actions...

Erase the embodiment of your pain and doubt, Alice...
Prepare to kill the Jabberwocky....

HI GUYS!!!!!! OMG! I DID NOT UPDATE FOR SO LONG...... /cries

Anyways this is my fanmade story for Heart no kuni no Alice!
So the story goes like this...
Alice for so reason wants to visit the jokers.... but end up lost in the prison realm... she traveled deep into the prison and found a door heavily sealed shut with all the chains and stuff. When she touched the door the jokers arrived yelling to alice you hurry and stay away from the door. As Alice turned around the door suddenly opened and pulled Alice in with much force. Peter who was searching for Alice, saw this scene and tries to save Alice but failed as the door shut tight again with it's chains in place....and now Alice woke up in a strange land where the sky is blood red. She was suddenly attack by these shadows (on the picture) who wants to take her heart. (the wonderland shadows collects broken clocks, underland's shadows steals live clocks or hearts) She was saved by Benjamin Griffith (i'll post a pic of him next time) by defeating the shadows for her. Alice thanks Benjamin for saving her. Benjamin asked a lot of questions to Alice. Benjamin role is the Gryphon working for the Jokers to guard the inner door of under land making sure nothing goes in wonderland and protect the lost wonderland resident until he/she can escape. Underland is a world-sized prison to dangerous role holders whose crimes is there existence themselves. Any resident in underland who would escape underland can cause great havoc in wonderland. The Three greatest threats are the Jabberwocky, the JubJub bird and the Bandersnatch. Those three role holders very powerful and have a huge grudge against the Joker. For now they are content with the system of land in underland because they are rules of the land. Underland is divided in to 3 part in accordance to the three great monsters. Benjamin duty now is to protect Alice as she strives to survive, meet these powerful role holders and escape Underland.

(Not sure if i will make it into a real story though.... this is one of the stories that is just sitting in my drawer for quite a while...)

Note: The wonderland role holders can talk to Alice through the dreamworld by Nightmare....

Now for the 3 rulers of Underland!!!

The middle: Wilfred Marker, The Jabberwocky
His appearance is of a noble gentleman but he can transform into a horrifying dragon as tall as The Castle of Hearts. He acts gentlemanly to Alice but show cruelty to Alice when he figured out that she is a foreigner. The cruelty went to the point where Alice even doubts her own beliefs. He became cruel not because he want to but to have the opportunity to die. The only way to escape underland is for Alice is to kill him and because of this soul crushing cruelty, it gave Alice the reason to kill him. He wants to die because he can't stand the sight of living as a immortal monster and as the role of the jabberwocky, the only one who can kill him is a foreigner and a vorpal sword. He somewhat cares for Alice in the end so him dying can let Alice escape and he can finally die. Two birds in one stone, right?

The left side: Elizabeth MacDonnell, The Jubjub bird
The beautiful and elegant lady who the other 2 rulers nicknamed her as "The White Queen" for her hair and cold attitude. She can transform into a blueish-white bird with talons and beak sharp as a blade. In human form she can wield a scythe. Despite her title and appearance, she was the only one who accepted Alice in there domain as long as she serves her. As the story goes by, she acts like a strict mother who disciplines and corrects Alice on her one sided beliefs. When she lets her hair down, Alice thought that she resembled much of her real mother.

The right side: Keith Redgrave, The Bandersnatch
The arrogant and destructive man despite his height. He is the ruler of the military in Underland. His weapon is a giant cleaver and his transformation is a humongous dog like bear with a big mouth full of razor sharp teeth. Among the 3, He is the most insane and war hungry. Mostly seen trying to kill the Jabberwocky. There are times when Alice talks to him but he ends up mocking Alice or Alice avoiding him....
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Comments: 11

RandomFTfangirl202 [2015-07-25 09:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow sounds really cool! Is this on fanfiction.net or is it on deviantart?

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ann13angel In reply to RandomFTfangirl202 [2015-07-26 23:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Sadly, I did not have time to continue due to some complications in life... 

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DragonetXime [2015-06-26 02:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow! It looks real intersesting! I can't wait to get more info about this story of yours

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DraculaFan28 [2012-10-27 02:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Sweet!!!!!

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avrilthecat [2012-06-24 02:11:30 +0000 UTC]

ur dyscription is like a paragraph but i agree with u should write a story

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the-black-bunny-13 [2012-05-06 03:23:29 +0000 UTC]

i so want to read this!!!

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the-black-bunny-13 [2012-04-11 16:02:36 +0000 UTC]

you should totally write this fanfic! i'll read it!

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ann13angel In reply to the-black-bunny-13 [2012-04-12 10:45:40 +0000 UTC]

E-eeeh?! really?!Thank you... w-well i'm still processing the plot and some other characters though so it may take me a long while... i'll try to finish it soon ;A;

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the-black-bunny-13 In reply to ann13angel [2012-04-12 11:36:29 +0000 UTC]

do your best! i'll be cheering for you!

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Link-Zelda-lover [2012-02-05 02:18:42 +0000 UTC]

this looks very interesting I hope you make a story of it ^^

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PhantomEnvy [2011-12-23 01:11:22 +0000 UTC]

This sounds AWESOME. You should totally write this story!! 8D

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