oneortheother [2013-02-24 07:04:08 +0000 UTC]
Doing things chronologically seems to make the most sense, really xD
Content-wise, this is mostly build-up, so I do hope you forgive me for skipping over most of it. It was coherent and it set up the background nicely, which is all you can ask for, really! It's not the focus here, so I'll move on. I mean you could summarize it in one word, really. MAGIC TRAINING. Oh, and TICKLE MAGIC TRAINING. That's it, really xD
As I'm sure Jay is well aware, /m stuff is not really my cup of tea, but it was tastefully done and SUPER FLIRTY as per usual, which I swear is AV's signature. The characterization of Vynnen as calm and stoic while Anais is more of a fiery temperament is a pattern I'm seeing in your stories, so I do have to wonder if AV's beloved is a fiery gal!
What I do love is that you have a fondness for doing something all good tickle writers do, is that have little tickle events that are going on in the background, little comments like: "One table in particular had failed to answer many of the questions asked, much to the delight of their professor. When the class concluded, the young man and woman sitting at that table were the quickest to leave, knowing full well that they would have ample opportunity to study again later under Professor Ochri’s very thorough tutoring."
I REALLY WANT TO HEAR ABOUT THIS THOROUGH TUTORING (:
I also thought the fact that the tower makes the soles of the people who walk underneath it more ticklish to be quite the devilish idea. I salute the creator of this enchantment!
Oh, and Prof Ochri and Kara need to get some tickles. It's amazing how they get away scot free for their teasing and confrontational behaviour!
I feel sorry for Anais being hoist by her own petard, but ahh well, c'est la vie xD
ONTO THE NEXT AND HOTTER PART.
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AnnalsVotary In reply to oneortheother [2013-02-24 08:07:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, tickle magic training is more or less what's happening before it gets juicy
I'm really glad you liked those parts, and yes, the flirtiness as well as the characterization is based somewhat on me and the fiance's daily shenanigans. It's really fun to write but maybe I should give some more variety in future tales. Don't want to make all my main characters too similar in the long run.
Aww, thank you! I try to leave little details like that in the story. Much like different personality quirks and extra descriptions can give life to a character, I think that additional details and little happening in the background can give life to the setting. Good eye, as always
Thank you! I hope it's a good enough excuse to give everyone in the world deliciously soft and unbearably ticklish feet lol.
I've been thinking that if I eventually return to the series, I'll have to have the professors get it.
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