Comments: 16
lydia-san [2015-01-03 05:05:55 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa this is soo touching
I really really love the idea, the pose, the expressions, the way they're holding hands.. It gives certain feelings.
The anatomy is perfect, the shading is also good! I think you can improve more on the contrast, but this is already very good
Oh, and I love the way you draw the hair, so natural!! and the folds make this piece even nicer
I also love that u put the wings (and the meaning behind it is... waaahhh )
However, I think the background can be more eye-catching. The main object of the piece already produces intense atmosphere, but I think the background can give more warmth to the piece. This is already good, but the absence of "floor" are kinda odd. Well but it's just preference I guess. How about putting "bokeh-light" like this --> pursuitofillumination.files.wo…
or this
to produce a simple background that intensifies the atmosphere?
Oh, and I also find it quite odd that the guy's left foot seems disappearing to the darkness. I don't know if it's just me but I can't shake the feelings that there should be a more visible foot there.
Anyway, this is a wonderful piece, I wish u the best, and your brother too!!
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annaluci In reply to lydia-san [2015-01-19 10:49:10 +0000 UTC]
Hi! as I say to the person below I would like to excuse myself for the to-much-long time I took to reply to your comment!
Moving on your comment: Thank you! It is so joyful and enthusiastic it made me smile (and blush a little for the lots of compliment!)!
I'm glad it gives you feelings...that's the ultimate purpose of this drawing and knowing it worked is super satisfactory!
As for the background.. yeah, I know... I hate backgrounds an I suck at them.. I will try the bokeh-light next time or I will try to put more attention!!
As for the left foot... I don't know... on my pc I see it but on my phone it become invisible.. I guess it is something due to luminosity and contrast.. who knows!
Thank you again! Stay tuned!!
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gracefulsunshine [2014-12-30 20:06:28 +0000 UTC]
comment on behalf of C:
the effort and meaning and thought you've put into this is truly astounding. the shading on the skin is lovely, and you've done a wonderful job of bringing out the complexities in the skin array. in addition, the yellow shirt folds/creases are on spot - the contrast is extremely noticeable.
one should note that the guy's torso is incorrectly proportioned, as his anatomically left side of the body barely has any shoulder to speak of compared to his right side. the girl's face/hair seem oddly disjoint, and while the contrasts and features on the face are amazing, it seems as if her hair line stars near the top of her head instead of starting from her forehead.
in addition, you've located your light source, but it doesn't seem to be present in all aspects of the subjects; while the girl's face is lit up, her hair, part of her arm, and clothes show no signs of any light source. the same goes for part of guy's clothes - colour theory wise, it isn't matching up with the lighting that is on the girl.
but other than that, lovely work! keep on drawing and i hope your brother manages to figure out a way from whatever he's dealing with.
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annaluci In reply to gracefulsunshine [2015-01-19 10:33:28 +0000 UTC]
Hi! first of all sorry for the looong time it took me to reply to your lovely and useful comment! I was quite busy in the last few weeks and I didn't stop by DA enough to reply properly..
About your comment... I'm really grateful for the time you took to look at my drawing and write a very detailed and professional review. It mean a lot to me as it is the proof my drawing bring you some feelings and that's what I wanted to accomplish.
Thank you for the compliment and for the kind wish for my brother, but more then that I would like to thank you for the critics you moved because I really need them to improve myself. I will treasure them!
I hope you will keep an eye on me!
Thank you again!
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panncske In reply to annaluci [2014-12-26 16:23:51 +0000 UTC]
no problem >uo
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Gamer5444 [2014-12-25 20:17:18 +0000 UTC]
Perfect!
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YovanaYin [2014-12-23 16:09:41 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful !
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MyChemicalGinger [2014-12-12 14:21:14 +0000 UTC]
OMGs Anna, ma è bellissimo *^* sei bravissima!!!
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annaluci In reply to MyChemicalGinger [2014-12-12 16:38:06 +0000 UTC]
Macccciao!!!!! sei OVUNQUE donna!!!!! grazie!!!!!
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annaluci In reply to romanall [2014-12-12 12:18:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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