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AnneClaude — Valentine's day - YunaXtidus
Published: 2010-02-14 02:18:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2334; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 0
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Happy Valentine's day everyone! Well here is my promised coloring of my last drawing: Yuna and Tidus from Final Fantasy.
It's crap! I don't like it... but anyway, I submit it, because I need your comments, it's really important!
There are no improvement in my drawings and my coloring style so I wonder what is wrong with me.
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This is an awesome painting, although I like the pairing, but I have cloud x tifa as a preference. Great never the less.
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Ohh, the colours are so gorgeous O_O It really seems like you spent your time with this and it paid off!
Yuna and Tidus =
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Thank you! I think I've spent 5 hours on it, and I still hate the result but anyway, I'm glad you like it! Thanks for commenting
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Well, I certainly was thinking this can't be a one-hour job 
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moiu je le trouve pas mal meme si tu as deja fair mieux je trouve mais y a qu en sentrainant qu on sameliore
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Thank you ^^ Do you think there's something I should improve? coloring, lineart, background...
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hang on, i'll have another look...
well, to be honest, everything you have in this picture is well done. but if it was pushed a little more, it could be better, you know what i mean? like, for example, i was looking at the lineart - it is lovely. the strokes are nice and not to harsh (especially on tidus), but if you break it up a bit more, it would work that tad bit to the advantage of the pic. give it more life and stuff. the shading is quite nice also. well done ^_^ looks like you worked hard on it. if you blended it a bit more though, i think it would make the picture less flat. not saying its blotchy or anything, but... oh man, now i feel bad. its such a nice picture, and i'm not in any way an expert... but i thought i'd just say that, since you asked.... I DO LOVE IT THOUGH!!
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Don't feel bad, I'm always pleased to have such comments! To read such a constructive critique as yours is always great!
I had never noticed the things you pointed out, and I must admit you're right: next time I'll try to make a lineart a bit more broken and I'll try to resolve my blending-problem (it's something I'm not good at).
Anyway, thank you! your comment really cheers me up! (sorry for my english)
By the way, I'll have a look at your gallery!
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