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Anomalous-Blake — Forever Loyal

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Description Erika adored her Mightyena. It was given to her when she was young, at the time he had been an adorable little Poochyena. He loved her as much as she loved him. Just four months ago, Poochyena decided to accompany Erika in her Pokemon journey. Over those months, he had grown from an affectionate house pet to a fierce, brave, and unquestionably loyal Mightyena. Erika knew that they would always be the best of friends.

That is, until today.

She was caught in a battle with just an ordinary Camper, taking down his first two pokemon easily with her strong Bayleef. Then the Camper sent out Ponyta. Knowing better then to have a grass pokemon go against a fire pokemon, Erika returned Bayleef and sent out her beloved Mightyena.

“Mightyena, use faint attack!” She cheered. Mightyena charged forward, a dark purple-pink ring forming around his forehead. The energy grew greater, Mightyena ran faster, and then in a flash, he vanished and the dark pulse of energy crashed into Ponyta. Erika’s pokemon appeared in front of her, and she praised him with a pat on the head.

“Ponyta, get up!” The other trainer screeched. The hurt pokemon staggered to its feet and the trainer commanded it to use ember. A trail of flames then shot from Ponyta’s mouth and moved swiftly towards Mightyena. Erika’s pokemon was quick; he jumped out of the way just as the attack scorched past him.

“Great, now use take down!” She told Mightyena. Mightyena shot forward, full speed, and threw all of his weight at Ponyta. Ponyta crumpled to the ground.

“Useless pokemon!” The trainer grumbled as he recalled Ponyta and handed Erika money.

“Good job Mightyena!” Erika cooed as she bent down and embraced her pokemon.

“Maaan…” the trainer sighed, “if I had a pokemon as powerful as your Mightyena, I’d be unstoppable! …I know! How about I get your phone number and then I’ll call you when my pokemon are strong like yours?”

“Uhh…sure?” Erika shrugged as she exchanged numbers with the trainer. Then she called out her Swellow and flew off on it. Not knowing the horrible plan the trainer had in his mind.

Much earlier than she could have ever imagined he would, the trainer called her. “Hey Erika! These past few hours I’ve been working harder than ever before, and I want to try and battle you again!” He hung up with a ‘click’. Erika shrugged and flew to the spot where she had battled with the trainer before. She expected the battle to go by as quickly as it had before, but it went much differently than that.

She first sent out her Mightyena, and the trainer sent out Raticate. “Raticate, use hyper fang and hold him down!” He shouted. Erika felt uneasy about the way he said ‘hold him down’. Raticate knocked Mightyena over and clung on to his arm with its huge fangs. Suddenly the trainer thrust a net over Mightyena, then, as he called back his Raticate, flung an ultra ball forward. Erika realized with horror that this low life trainer was stealing her pokemon from her. What was he, a Team Rocket grunt? She watched as the ultra ball bounced off of Mightyena’s head. Then, with a blinding flash of light, he was gone, trapped in the ultra ball.

“What’s your problem!?” Erika screamed, balling her hands into tight fists. The trainer simply smirked, picked up the ultra ball, and ran away.

So that was it. Erika’s best friend in the world was gone. Stolen. She had done nothing in an attempt to rescue it. She didn’t know what to do. She tried to take a step forward, but her legs crumpled from beneath her and she fell into a heap on the ground. Her head in her arms, she began to cry. She cried for a long time. It wasn’t until nightfall that she finally stood up and let all of her pokemon out of their poke balls.

Slowly she moved her gaze from her Bayleef, to her Swellow, to her Smeargle, to her Seadra, and then to the empty space where Mightyena should have been. In a low voice, she growled, “We’ll get him back. No matter what it takes, we’ll find that thief and make him pay.” Something inside Erika had changed. She no longer cared about the fate that may befall her. She was only determined to find her dearest friend.

Over the next five weeks, Erika trained her pokemon hard, and she struggled through countless landscapes, searching for that trainer. One day, when she was lost, hurt, and hungry, she was a about ready to give up hope until she heard a voice. Erika recognized that voice. It was the voice of that horrible trainer, a voice that she had planted in her mind and would never, ever forget. Just a few yards away, the trainer was battling with a wild Marowak. He was using Mightyena. He was using Erika’s Mightyena.

Mightyena looked fierce, not the kind of fierce he was before, now his eyes looked bloodthirsty, and unforgiving. His once graceful and sturdy fur was now matted and saggy, and several scratches covered his chest. What has that trainer done to him? Erika thought. Then, as Mightyena finished off the Marowak, the trainer started to walk away. Erika had to do something before it was too late. “Hey!” She called out angrily.

The trainer turned around, his eyes grew wide as he spotted Erika. “Give me back my pokemon!” She screamed as she glided forward.

The trainer smirked, “You’ll have to battle for him!” Erika charged and released Smeargle from his poke ball. The other trainer chose to use Mightyena. As soon as Mightyena turned and faced Erika’s Smeargle, the evil look in his eyes vanished. All of the devilish, bloodthirsty thoughts in his mind turned to old loyalty towards Erika.

“Mightyena! Destroy that Smeargle!” The trainer demanded. Mightyena turned to his so called ‘master’ and snarled viciously. Then, before Erika could even progress in her mind what was happening, Mightyena lunged at the trainer’s throat. Though this trainer stole her pokemon in order to settle his ambitions, Erika knew that no one deserved to be killed by any pokemon. So as quickly as she could she raced forward and dragged Mightyena off of the trainer.

Blood gushed from the wound on the trainer’s throat, and weakly he cried, “You lousy pokemon…you betrayed me…” Then he grabbed a poke ball from his belt and released the pokemon that was inside. In a flash of red light, a Nidorino appeared.

“Kill that dumb pokemon…” he growled. Nidorino lowered his poisonous horn and charged. Mightyena jumped out of the way just in time. Then he leapt forward and rammed his head into Nidorino’s side. Nidorino skid a few feet, but seemed scarcely injured at the least. With a grunt, he lunged at Mightyena again.

“Please, is this all necessary?” Erika cried. The trainer was still lying on the ground, commanding his Nidorino to attack. Mightyena then turned again to the trainer, and jumped on him. His razor like fangs tore and slashed the trainer’s throat and chest. In an effort to save his trainer, the Nidorino pointed his venomous horn again and headed right towards Mightyena’s chest.

“Stop it! Stop it!” Erika screamed. She then lunged forward and wrapped her arms around Mightyena. Tears streamed down her face as a stinging pain pierced her side. Mightyena turned from the trainer’s body, which was now dead, and watched as Erika’s arms loosened from around him.

Erika landed hard on the ground. She could feel the poison from Nidorino slowly coursing through her veins. Mightyena whined and sat close to her side. Tears began to well up in his big amber eyes. Erika’s vision started going blurry, and she felt Mightyena licking her side where the stab was. There was nothing she could do but gently wrap her arm around Mightyena’s neck and whisper, “Good boy…” as her life slowly faded away.

Erika’s arm fell away from Mightyena, her eyes remained wide open, staring forward into nothingness as tears continued to stream from them. Mightyena fiercely licked her face, hoping to wake her up. Soon he realized there was no hope. Slowly he stood, threw his head up to the sky, and howled away his pain.

As the last sound of his howls faded away into the distance, Mightyena curled up next to Erika’s body and slept.

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200 years later, there is said to be a mountain side where no trainer dares to go. For a fierce beast lives there, a beast that protects the bony remains of a long lost friend from any intruders who may wish to do her more harm…
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It howls at the moon and hunts prey in packs. It will never disobey the commands of anyone it deems to be its leader.
Entry for Mightyena in a Diamond and Pearl pokemon handbook I own.

For 's contest.

After I read the description I thought, "What if it didn't think of someone as its leader?" and I also thought, "what if it was driven into thinking that nobody except for one single person was its leader?"

And then this happened. I really wanted to draw a picture but I really wanted to write a story. So I did both. PLEEEAAASE read it I spent forever on it. (the writing and the picture)

The picture was done completely on MS paint with mostly a mouse...ouch...

Pokemon, Mightyena (C) Nintendo/Game FREAK
Art, Story (C) *KH-wolf
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Comments: 139

Wobbley [2016-11-21 22:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Stupid Nidorino that poisoned Erika!  Stupid trainer that ordered Nidorino to kill Erika! They deserve to be fainted.

(Sends out Ursaring)

Ursaring, Tear that trainer and that Nidorino to pieces!

(Ursaring slices Nidorino to pieces using its claws, and then mauls the trainer to death.)

That will teach you, you meanie!

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Articuno32 In reply to Wobbley [2017-02-06 06:37:46 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO! THEY DON'T DESERVE TO BE FAINTED!!! THEY DESERVE TO DIIIIIEEEEE!

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Wobbley In reply to Articuno32 [2017-02-07 22:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Well said. Do you mind making a story about the trainer and his Nidorino receiving some sort of comeuppance for his actions against Erika?

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Articuno32 In reply to Wobbley [2017-02-07 23:39:36 +0000 UTC]

I have an idea:
Alternate Universe Ending: Erika actually survives the poisoning since poison wears off after fainting and she and her Mightyena are transferred to a Centre. The enemy trainer survives too and goes to visit Erika and apologise. But Erika is mad at him for trying to separate her and Mightyena and brutally attacks the rival trainer and beats the Nidorino. Then she forces him to trade in his Nidorino for a recently caught Mightyena so that while the rival's damned lust for power of fulfilled, he learns what it's like to be separated from his Pokemon, etc, etc. Nidorino is a bit upset at being with a trainer that beat it up previously, but ends up being good friends with Mightyena, having now shared the same sad experience. Later on, Erika and the rival forgive each other and the latter gets their Pokemon back and learns to never steal Pokemon again and instead asking for the encounter location.

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Wobbley In reply to Articuno32 [2017-02-10 13:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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Articuno32 In reply to Wobbley [2017-02-10 20:04:30 +0000 UTC]

That's just a plot summary. It does seem like a good idea.

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AutumnleaftheWarrior [2016-10-25 15:54:19 +0000 UTC]

I have a mightyena, it is my strongest pokemon,   

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howlinghyaena [2014-04-04 20:49:19 +0000 UTC]

Omg that just made me cry...i loved it!

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to howlinghyaena [2014-04-05 04:21:27 +0000 UTC]

That was my plan eue and thanks!

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Sencilia-Harp [2012-06-08 13:51:46 +0000 UTC]

this is why i love mightyena

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to Sencilia-Harp [2012-06-10 03:46:25 +0000 UTC]

yeah lol

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Inkin-Oddity [2012-05-17 02:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Holy f*** Erika is my name!

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to Inkin-Oddity [2012-05-17 03:22:53 +0000 UTC]

xD

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human72 [2011-11-15 15:44:13 +0000 UTC]

It is time to put this matter to rest. Men of the 52nd Tera regament we go to the mountans and we will deal with ths matter personally.

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Princess-Neko-ChanXO [2011-09-21 21:33:06 +0000 UTC]

i wanted to cry but i was in a library and i cant have that lol! XD

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to Princess-Neko-ChanXO [2011-09-24 04:43:15 +0000 UTC]

aha xD

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Princess-Neko-ChanXO In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-09-24 11:29:07 +0000 UTC]

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Zecral10 [2011-08-07 01:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Poor thing. *tries to hug it*

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RavenLunaticArt [2011-04-12 13:05:55 +0000 UTC]

omg this is soooooooo sad and beautiful at the same time!

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to RavenLunaticArt [2011-04-12 13:52:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^u^

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RavenLunaticArt In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-04-12 20:58:40 +0000 UTC]

oh its nothing! i dove pokemanz!

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to RavenLunaticArt [2011-04-13 03:42:44 +0000 UTC]

hehe x3

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RavenLunaticArt In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-04-13 22:27:37 +0000 UTC]

^^ im curently trying to make a pokesona but i cant deside on a pokemon hybrid........

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to RavenLunaticArt [2011-04-14 01:31:33 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm.....

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RavenLunaticArt In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-04-14 03:02:51 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm..... what?

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to RavenLunaticArt [2011-04-14 14:32:27 +0000 UTC]

idk xD

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RavenLunaticArt In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-04-14 21:27:34 +0000 UTC]

ha lol

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guineapig590 [2011-04-10 00:32:44 +0000 UTC]

sorry for putting it twice

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to guineapig590 [2011-04-10 05:23:00 +0000 UTC]

it's alright xD

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guineapig590 [2011-04-10 00:32:12 +0000 UTC]

wow this actually made me cry a little its great

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guineapig590 [2011-04-10 00:32:12 +0000 UTC]

wow this actually made me cry a little its great

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to guineapig590 [2011-04-10 05:23:11 +0000 UTC]

why thank you c:

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guineapig590 In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-04-10 05:27:48 +0000 UTC]

np

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ShadowFrost1 [2011-04-03 04:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice. I like it. I wonder why Erika didn't threw a pokeball to block the ultra ball like in the pokemon anime/game lol

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to ShadowFrost1 [2011-04-03 04:15:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks

yeah...I wonder xD

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twwister [2011-03-25 19:10:48 +0000 UTC]

I like ittt

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to twwister [2011-03-26 13:43:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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TheSuperInsaneninja [2011-03-23 18:32:19 +0000 UTC]

this is really good >w<

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to TheSuperInsaneninja [2011-03-23 19:57:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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KaitouKidnLucyPThief [2011-02-25 11:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Sad and Epic! Mightyena is usually one of my fave pokemons especially Poochyena lol xD

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to KaitouKidnLucyPThief [2011-02-25 15:49:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks! and yeah me too x3

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darkraiman1 [2011-02-20 05:01:15 +0000 UTC]

This is realy, realy, realy, realy, realy good!

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to darkraiman1 [2011-02-20 05:02:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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darkraiman1 In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-02-20 05:05:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
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Holy crap! THAT WAS ALL DONE ON MS PAINT?!?!?!?!

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to darkraiman1 [2011-02-20 06:35:02 +0000 UTC]



yep.

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darkraiman1 In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-02-20 16:19:06 +0000 UTC]

You're amazing at art!

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to darkraiman1 [2011-02-21 02:00:46 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks

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darkraiman1 In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-02-21 04:19:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

(lol it might be 'cause this is the best I can do, on photoshop, with help 0_0 [link] )

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Anomalous-Blake In reply to darkraiman1 [2011-02-21 04:24:59 +0000 UTC]

awww, just practice a lot and you'll improve

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darkraiman1 In reply to Anomalous-Blake [2011-02-21 16:11:26 +0000 UTC]

I guess... IDK I haven't been drawing for very long, though and digital art is f***ing hard. So yeah... But thanks for the motavation! I realy appreceate it!

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