BlackRavenKuria [2013-08-13 21:54:30 +0000 UTC]
I really like how you did this. I have never heard of or seen this way of poetry before. I really like how you have a letter on almost every line on brackets and when you put letters in in order they read an important part of the poem. Like a thought. It was a very ingenious idea you had. I love it.
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fictionfreak13 [2013-07-30 15:58:00 +0000 UTC]
I love this. It's very clever, what you've done with the parentheses. Well done.
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