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11LetsDrawPonies11 [2016-04-17 02:59:19 +0000 UTC]
"Dun worry- I'm's a professional"
"Dun try dis at hum kidz"
Same
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CrownedCloud [2016-03-29 12:41:41 +0000 UTC]
So that's the reasoning as to why he'll leave. Made more sense than Frisk, honestly
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AnonymousCoyote In reply to CrownedCloud [2016-03-29 12:45:46 +0000 UTC]
Well Frisk is a silent protagonist who you're supposed to project yourself onto. Finnagan on the other hand is a loud silly OC who does what he wants.
So yeah, nothing to motivate him like the fury of a certain brunette... XD
((I'm a little bit sad though that I don't get to hear your reaction to hearing about her since I've already told you about her XP oh well))
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CrownedCloud In reply to AnonymousCoyote [2016-03-29 12:56:12 +0000 UTC]
Sorry. i'll admit i finally have a face to go with it, but i'll probably give a reaction better when i learn a little more about her in the next part.
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AnonymousCoyote In reply to CrownedCloud [2016-03-29 13:09:33 +0000 UTC]
Why are you apologizing? I'm the one who told you about her. Don't worry. XP
But yeah next two pages were really fun to draw and can't wait to see people's reactions. XD
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AnonymousCoyote In reply to TheCopyUniverseTCU [2016-03-29 21:24:41 +0000 UTC]
Well if you were talking about the brunette she would find it typical.
Toriel I don't think would notice. Just like how she hasn't commented about the random costume change. She's distracted by other things. Flowey noticed because he had this whole speech prepared.
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TheCopyUniverseTCU In reply to AnonymousCoyote [2016-03-29 21:34:51 +0000 UTC]
I don't know, I would be kinda thrown off if I saw if the that 'child' I was trying to protect had an emoji instead of a heart.
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AnonymousCoyote In reply to TheCopyUniverseTCU [2016-03-29 21:45:21 +0000 UTC]
I'll take it into consideration but think about her mental state when she would see his soul. I doubt you pay attention that well when you're THAT upset.
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TheCopyUniverseTCU In reply to AnonymousCoyote [2016-03-30 01:35:24 +0000 UTC]
That's understandable. It'd be funnier as an afterthought thing, after Finnegan has already left.
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AnonymousCoyote In reply to TheCopyUniverseTCU [2016-03-30 02:13:45 +0000 UTC]
You are the first because you're the first one to point something like this out.
AND THAT'S AWESOME!
I love feed back. besides I didn't have it drawn out so it wasn't a big deal.
The script goes through like three drafts before I post this stuff. First I sit down and write it, then I draw it, and then I change bits of dialogue while coloring it.
Phase two was going to have me reworking the scene anyway this just helped me add more.
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