Dagnirion [2005-05-30 04:37:13 +0000 UTC]
Well, I've never heard the song before, so maybe what you wrote is based on the lines, asides for the obvious line used from the song. Anyway, just two things I see. One, a rebel vigilante. Obviously, you are trying to get the notion across about how rebellious this person is. Well, a rebel vigilante is a double-negative of sorts, and is actually a person who obeys the rules and such. It's a rebel rebel. And the second thing is from Chicago to Toronto...Technically, Chicago isn't too far from Toronto. Different countries, yes, but distance wise, not greatly far apart. Maybe from something like from New York to LA, or NY to Tokyo, if you're feeling international...
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