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Jioey [2011-04-19 18:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Nice piece, looks quite abstract and it's pretty cool with the angles

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3wyl [2011-04-14 18:37:48 +0000 UTC]

I like the perspective and how we are solely focused on the ramp here! It's quite interesting how there is nothing else to distract us so that we really pay attention to it all here. I feel as if the vignette and the monotone greatly aid in that too, although they add some good effect to the piece generally anyway.

I feel you could have caught this at an angle, perhaps, to make it more interesting.. or you could have made it wider... Or maybe you could rotate it? Rotate it 90 degrees and then crop it into a square. Sure, it would be pretty experimental and abstract, but nobody could say that it wouldn't be intriguing to see.

That's just me, though.

All in all, it's not too bad. I like the way the bottom is dark whilst the top is light. Great contrast there.

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