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Published: 2015-02-04 11:22:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Avast lads, tomorrow has come,Nay we will sail by dawn,
Today we shall tone the blanched spite,
Last that by wonders we've seen.
Say by the betroth,
I shall go for the day has won,
At bay I doth to wait at nite,
Beginning of a journey that have been.
Accomplished by plastered bright,
Games and foils for all days,
Months to years I have rideth,
None shall accomplish the last pact.
"Captain, why must thoust dieth?"
Asked at a pitiful plight,
"Dieth of honor bounded by oath,
Thist day shall be no owned tact!"
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Unless you meant to jumble verb conjugations here are some corrections on the grammar:
Line 1 "hath come" not "has cometh"
Line 7 "I do" or "I doeth" not "I doth", "doth" is used after 3rd person singular (he, she, it)
Line 11 "I hath ridden" not "I have rideth"
Line 13 "thou" not "thoust"
Line 16 "this" not "thist"
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Thist is the third person for the word "this" which I found on a really old dictionary...
Also I was going to edit the has cometh into has come but I fell asleep on the keyboard.
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