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AOGRAI β Robot City: Scorpio Squad Leader
Published: 2015-08-29 08:38:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2185; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 35
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Around Earth Year 9906, it is the Golden Age of Technology under the wise rule of the Supreme Guardian of Mankind... the God-like Emperor of Man has encouraged man to conquer space and acquire as much minerals and technology. Β Entrepreneurs of technology like the makers of Scorpio War Droids, Scorpio Mechanix Inc, have joined many more such companies which dwell in the Planet of Gliese... in the City of Gliese otherwise known as Robot City. Β They have had to make sure that their own survival comes first. They have therefore set up their own elite Scorpio Security units to ensure technological espionage is dealt with swiftly and without mercy.A little something I did earlier, and I wanted to submit this while I busy myself trying to finish the Character Profile of another Character.
Hope you will all forgive my delay in submission.
Daz Studio 4.8
Iray render
Post work in PS
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I take this serious, critiquing some ones work is risky, it can end friendships and or make you feel like a fool. Not even sure why I continue to do it...Well I know why, but to many people it may sound corny. See, I care about 3D art. 3D art has set my curiosity and my creativity lose in a way no other media has been able to do. After all the years of struggling in 2D trying to get my message out I have found a medium that has set me free. It is a great feeling and I just can't help wanting to pass that feeling on, hoping that others too feel half of what I feel.
I am a story teller, my renders are conceived and constructed to tell a story...This is where your critique starts. Cheese cake shots such as this one serve a purpose. I consider them training areas. Doing these types of renders let you learn your lessons and the tools of the trade. But there comes a time that you are ready to move on. Question is what do you move on to from this point.
Your technique is very good here, the detail work is great. What is missing is the story and your ready for it. Your ready to start letting your imagination take wing. Your ready to imagine a scene, a whole scene, multiple characters. Your ready to give your main characters a reason for being. I does have to be an earth changing story, simply giving a mission statement for your character is enough....
Course you can always flake out on me and start making sales adds for other peoples products...lol
I send everyone on the same trip when I see their work reach a certain point, see that is my thing, I am the story teller, the job pays crap and the hours are horrible, most people won't even understand the story your trying to tell, but as I say I am a story teller and try as I might I can't tell all the stories that need to be told all by myself... Remember, no matter how good you become, it is but a beginning, a mere start of something even better to come..
So there is your critique from the muse driven crazy story teller, do with it what you will, but above all..have fun....
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I am studying this before I critique this...
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HEY!! I have almost this EXACT image! LOL! Same colors and weapons! LOLOLOL!!
Now my picture is not that expertly done, your Image is amazingly well put together!!
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Really, what a coincidence... Maybe you should put it up so I can view it too! Thank you by the way.
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ok i will.. It was a test image.. but i'll find it
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Oh hell, it wont be long.....
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I uploaded two of the test renders i found.. Look in my scrapbook..
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I just allowed my Watchers to see it I think.. Tell me if you see them.
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OK saw them... I chose the same texture map as you did for this model. but the pose is different. I was hoping to see a similar pose too. Thanks for sharing.
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Like your character too. The Laser effect of the riffle looks fanatstic.
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Thank you. Used Rons brush as basis for the post work.
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Very interesting character! Great render, good lights!
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