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Apheline — Getting Laid [NSFW]
Published: 2010-07-06 14:39:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1422; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 10
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Description Her lips touched mine just as another thump rang out in the walk-in refrigerator.  It echoed in the darkness.  A slight chill still hung in the air, even though the power that kept the small room cool must have been out for several days.  I didn't really notice the cold; my mind only pieced it together as I noted Jessica's nipples poking against me as she slid her hands under my bra.  A small voice in the back of my mind tugged at me, urged me to run – those monsters outside would kill us or we'd die trapped in this room.  My hands had other plans – they simply tugged Jessica's shirt off.

Have you ever had that cliché conversation?  Maybe you were standing around between classes in high school with your friends or at a sleep over or a party.  You know the one I am talking about.  It goes something like, "What would you do if you only had 10 minutes to live?"  Maybe your friends were optimists and it was "a day to live," but the premise is the same: What would you do in those final moments which could somehow make your whole life matter?  Then everyone laughs and a few people say, "I'd go to Paris," or, "I'd bungee jump."  But then someone finally says what everyone else is thinking: "I'd get laid."  After that everyone laughs uncomfortably and the conversation turns to something less embarrassing.

Well, I was always the "fly to Paris" type of girl.  But apparently my prudish giggles when one of my friends would say, "I'd get laid," were all for show.

These were my final minutes on Earth, at least they were very likely to be, and there I was getting naked with a girl I hadn't even known the day before.  Maybe it is just the need for comfort and to be with someone which drove us into each others' arms and out of our clothes.  Or perhaps it's some primal instinct to procreate at all costs when life as we know it is in danger… Although, in this case, that seemed less likely.  I had heard of frogs being able to change sex sometimes in order to get each other pregnant, but never humans.  But that was some dinosaur movie, I was pretty sure, and who knows if you can trust horror films.

I started as Jessica kissed the inside of my thigh; suddenly realising she had most of my clothes off.  As she unhooked my bra, I noticed that she seemed to do it very deftly.  I didn't even know she was a lesbian.  Hell, I didn't even know I was a lesbian.  I mean, I guess I was sort of aware of an odd sensation when I walked by a pretty girl, but I never would have thought…  It didn't matter.  Jessica was completely naked and my hand was between her legs and it seemed pretty pointless to argue the logistics of it all in my head with her breast in my mouth.  Besides, what did it matter?  I was about to die.

The banging on the door had become more rapid and our fingers unconsciously picked up the pace to keep time with it.  "I was a fool," I whispered – half-moaned – in Jessica's ear.

"Why?"

"This is way better than Paris."  She kissed me, pushing her tongue in my mouth as my body jerked.  I was a puppet to her desires.  She had me wrapped around her finger.  I tried to giggle at my inner monologue's pun, but the thought quickly vanished as she moaned, biting my earlobe.

At that moment, the door to the walk-in refrigerator opened.  Somehow they had managed to push it open.  But it didn't matter.  We didn't even look toward them, not that we could see them in the darkness.  We stood together as one quivering, shaking mass and stared oblivion in the face as any two human beings would, "getting laid."
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Comments: 34

EmoAARtist93 [2010-07-12 07:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I love how the erotic factor doesn't interfer with the... Gosh, I don't know how to put it. I wanna say romance, but that was clearly toused out when you said "... and there I was getting naked with a girl I hadn't even known the day before." Lol! Let's try again. Lol. I feel that the erotic factor of the story didn't overlook the... Emotional longing of a warm (really warm considering you are in a fridge! ) body to be with you-- wrappped around you. By the way, how in the heck did you come up with the setting of a fridge??? Lol. I must know!!! I actually think this one is my favorite (funny, cuz I like men and not women. ). This is beautiful.

Although I wish you would have added something to the monsters. like: "The monsters snarling out side of the door," or "the hairy beests digging at the hinges of the door." Just something to give them some characther.
The reason I say so is because I though the monsters were people who were gay rights OPPOSERS. Like they were trying to stop you from "sinning" or something. LOL! (Sorry I didn't know it was erotic HORROR. D: )

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Apheline In reply to EmoAARtist93 [2010-07-12 07:20:32 +0000 UTC]

lol, first I just want to say that that must have been a pretty awesome picture in your head, a mob of crazed anti-gay people trying to get into a locked walk-in refrigerator. As long as you don't take it seriously anyway. In reality it would be pretty scary...

You are totally right about adding some stuff about the creatures outside, I was trying to keep it ambiguous, but them being "normal" (and I use the term loosely) human beings is too ambiguous.

As for how I came up with the setting of a fridge, I'm really not sure. I just thought that these girls were chased into a store or restaurant and where would you go to barricade yourself? Where's the safest, most secure place to lock yourself into? Plus, cold air kinda turns me on and I wanted to write something erotic-ish, so it seemed kinda natural. I wish I had a better reason, but really, it just sort of came out that way as soon as I started thinking about it about 10 minutes before I got sick of laying in the dark and decided I wouldn't be sleeping til I got the idea out of my head.

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EmoAARtist93 In reply to Apheline [2010-07-12 07:54:21 +0000 UTC]

It would be absolutely terrorfying.

And don't get me wrong I think the story is wonderful. But thank you.

Lol. I think that there is nothing wrong with the reason for the setting. That's what I would have done is write what appeals to me. Actually it's really inspiring. It makes me think of what I would write about with an erotic theme. But anyways, I'm glad you didn't fall asleep and wrote this instead; it's really a wonderfull piece. I just hope you didn't work yourself too hard to finish this.

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Apheline In reply to EmoAARtist93 [2010-07-12 08:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Nah, I wrote it all in about 30 minutes It came pretty quickly. It was an easy one to write for some reason. I look forward to your erotic fiction!

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EmoAARtist93 In reply to Apheline [2010-07-12 08:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee! I love when pieces turn out to be fast and well done. And LOL! Thanks! I hope it'll turn out half as good as yours!

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TL-97 [2010-07-11 07:04:55 +0000 UTC]

I think you're right about there not being as much horror in thins one, but that's not a bad thing. It still kept a good feel without being over the top or anything. Well written, and it was a good read. Thanks for sharing.

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Apheline In reply to TL-97 [2010-07-12 04:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much I am very glad you liked it! I hope it wasn't too pervy or anything.

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TL-97 In reply to Apheline [2010-07-13 00:07:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. It was fine really, keep it up.

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Secrets-Of-Paranoia [2010-07-08 23:15:36 +0000 UTC]

I like how you revealed just enough about the situation, and a little insight to her thoughts without it getting too long or uninteresting. Really good work, I'll certainly be thinking about what could have come through the door for awhile. ^^ My only complaint is the big blocks of text; You may need to break them up.

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Apheline In reply to Secrets-Of-Paranoia [2010-07-09 01:02:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh, the paragraphs do look a lot more daunting on dA than in Word! I'm sorry about that Thanks for the suggestion and I'm very glad you liked it! Appreciate you taking the time to read it

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Secrets-Of-Paranoia In reply to Apheline [2010-07-09 01:52:29 +0000 UTC]

It's alright, the width of the literature block is much smaller on DA and the don't even keep it consistent. And you're quite welcome, I liked it. ^^

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Apheline In reply to Secrets-Of-Paranoia [2010-07-09 01:57:28 +0000 UTC]

!

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Secrets-Of-Paranoia In reply to Apheline [2010-07-09 01:59:17 +0000 UTC]

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Ard3113 [2010-07-08 06:40:59 +0000 UTC]

It's just the primal instinct my dear ! but this has not anything to be related to the procreation... Is just the wish of not being alone, not going away alone... Fine short tale !

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Apheline In reply to Ard3113 [2010-07-08 06:46:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks! And yeah, I agree about it being important to not be alone.

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untilwefindit [2010-07-07 06:49:36 +0000 UTC]

i really really liked this! Super differant "horrotica" definately has potential

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Apheline In reply to untilwefindit [2010-07-07 15:17:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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kersee9 [2010-07-07 01:18:30 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful, a bit heart-wrenching and a turn on all at the same time. i like horrorotica.

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Apheline In reply to kersee9 [2010-07-07 03:05:44 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks I'm glad you liked it!

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Zephyrus-Wind [2010-07-07 00:41:59 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic. I love the way it's written and the way you presented it. The word choice is fantastic, and the atmosphere is captivating well done and bravo.

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Apheline In reply to Zephyrus-Wind [2010-07-07 03:06:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm really glad you liked it! It makes me happy that you enjoyed so much of my work

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Zephyrus-Wind In reply to Apheline [2010-07-07 03:50:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it was really fantastic.
I can't even describe...
It's just nice to see someone with relatively decent abilities on here that isn't mindless dribble.

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Apheline In reply to Zephyrus-Wind [2010-07-07 04:00:20 +0000 UTC]

It really means a lot to me for you to say that!

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Muzica-chan [2010-07-06 19:25:23 +0000 UTC]

It feels sooo hopeless while reading this. Like, it's really well written, but to them, it's all about pleasure, literally living for the moment. The ending was really absolute though, which I liked. Well written. ^_^

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Apheline In reply to Muzica-chan [2010-07-06 19:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much and thanks for taking the time to read it ^^

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Muzica-chan In reply to Apheline [2010-07-06 21:38:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Keep up the good work, and thank you for sharing. ^_^

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Apheline In reply to Muzica-chan [2010-07-06 21:40:38 +0000 UTC]

!

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fwwabear [2010-07-06 18:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Are you trying to make me blush?

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Apheline In reply to fwwabear [2010-07-06 18:37:04 +0000 UTC]

It's not my intention, merely a pleasant side-effect!

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Bluelezzie [2010-07-06 15:41:51 +0000 UTC]

i like it , i think the way she's thinking about whether she's lesbian and then finally realising it doesn't matter is interesting

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Apheline In reply to Bluelezzie [2010-07-06 15:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much I think that is sometimes how it happens. Sometimes we just get overwhelmed with emotion, be it love or lust (I think in this case it's mostly lust), and we realise that it's not about someone's sex, it's about the feeling and the power and the passion. Sometimes we just hae to surrender to it.

Thank you for the comment!

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Bluelezzie In reply to Apheline [2010-07-06 16:06:05 +0000 UTC]

yeah i agree

you're welcome

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NahaniMoon [2010-07-06 15:27:58 +0000 UTC]

more erotica than horror

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Apheline In reply to NahaniMoon [2010-07-06 15:54:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm not really big on the horror thing, I suppose

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