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artlover613 [2018-10-08 01:29:19 +0000 UTC]

I love this. Its so cool!

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The--Moniklr [2015-09-13 02:34:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm loving the edit. ^^ The dramatic lighting really adds to the image. :3

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RudeRoo [2015-08-26 09:13:35 +0000 UTC]

the color and lighting is good, but anatomy and proportion is always basic, learn more about them apple, u can learn by sketching (just lineart) like 10 pcs of full figure human each day and maybe look up some anatomy tutorial

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utria [2015-08-25 03:35:38 +0000 UTC]

She looks cute with her bubble gum. I like the colors and the background.

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Sokomin [2015-08-25 02:56:19 +0000 UTC]

I really like the warm colors and the mood it emits. A lot of people tend to forget that, but I like how you brought it up well^^
Also the textures you gave to the steps and the clothes are impressive.

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The--Moniklr [2015-08-25 00:42:33 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoy the piece. I'm always a fan of papery textures, so this is pretty awesome.

I feel like as far as lighting and shading goes, both could definitely be pushed more. It looks like a sunset scene, and both sunsets and sunrises are times of really powerful and dramatic lighting. So, if you have the time, it might be fun to play around with that. :3 As far a s the technique behind the lighting and shading, I do enjoy it. ^^The colors are nice and warm, and you get your point across.

Though I'm not sure I have the ability to point you in the right direction, the perspective feels a bit off to me. She's leaning in such a way that the foreshortening of her body doesn't feel like it's matching up with the perspective you've established with the stairs. The composition also feels a bit centered. While sometimes centering your subject is okay, some other times it's okay to not make your main subject the center of the piece. Just scooting them over a little more to the right or left could give your composition an entirely new feel because we'd also have some space to digest background information which can be just as important. ^^

And this is my own personal opinion, but I think studying real human anatomy could really help. :3 Anime/cartoons/any abstraction stems from a comprehension of reality. So if you can accurately render the world around you, you can gain the ability to abstract the worlds you create however you choose in a fashion that makes sense to the world you're depicting. ^^ 

Overall, it's a good piece and I look forward to seeing more in the future. :3

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unerii [2015-08-24 16:56:36 +0000 UTC]

pretty! she have really nice face! good job~

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eggsomniac [2015-08-24 16:52:22 +0000 UTC]

uwaaaa this is so cute!!!

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AmbergrisElement [2015-08-24 16:34:09 +0000 UTC]

She has a cute and somehow cheeky look.I also like the colors you used for this illustration.
I recommend you to practice a bit more the human anatomy,she has a very small head in contrast to her wide shoulders and legs.But it´s nevertheless a lovely work.

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