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ApricotLane — A good giggle

Published: 2010-03-31 18:57:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 310; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Description I need some help, should i keep this as a sketch like this or keep working into it? I'm worried i'll lose a lot of the freshness if i keep working at it.

Please tell me what you think?
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Comments: 7

CheshireSpider [2010-04-16 19:54:11 +0000 UTC]

Really like the detail in this one!

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tragicsleep [2010-04-01 16:33:14 +0000 UTC]

i like that the focal point is on the two girls. if you wanna change it, maybe add detail to the objects on the table, but keep the background vague.

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ApricotLane In reply to tragicsleep [2010-04-02 09:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Okay thanks! I'll add that into all the tweaks i'll be making soon.

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regourso [2010-03-31 21:18:09 +0000 UTC]

I say leave it as it is. There's so much expresiveness and the poses are just natural.

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ApricotLane In reply to regourso [2010-04-01 14:43:18 +0000 UTC]

Cool, thanks! Just a 101 little tweaks to make then....Joy. -_-

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JoeDillon [2010-03-31 19:23:26 +0000 UTC]

it looks great the way it is, with all the focus and detail on the main subject... and the hands are fantastic =]

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ApricotLane In reply to JoeDillon [2010-04-01 14:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yay hands!

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