Comments: 23
Itona [2009-11-29 11:49:24 +0000 UTC]
Lovely, great pose and great coloring c:
Okaaay, I'm gonna try to give some critique, but I'm very bad at such things xD
The eyes, they look pretty, but they're not looking to the leaf, they're more looking up to the sky.
And she looks a little heavy, but I don'know if that's the design c:
But I really like it so..ffffffff ignore my stupid critique xD
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Little-Mongolian [2009-11-28 20:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Body's too big and her legs are too chubby. it's neck should be thinner and he left arm seems to be bigger than the one on the right (viewer's point of view). do you still want me to critique further? There's more.
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AquariizaWolf In reply to Little-Mongolian [2009-11-28 20:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Yeahhh the body does seem a bit too big compared to the head. xD;;; Thank you, I'll keep that in mind next time I draw a cat. C:
Of coarse, go ahead!
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Little-Mongolian In reply to AquariizaWolf [2009-11-28 21:12:53 +0000 UTC]
okay. Make sure when it sits, give the spine a "s" curve. the ear on the left (viewer's point of view) make's the head look flat. and the scarf must look like it's coiled on the neck.
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night-howl [2009-11-28 07:52:44 +0000 UTC]
very cute ^^
the thigh needs to be wider, especially when sitting and the back of a cat has a hump to it.Try looking at photos of cats, that might help.
besides that very nice job ^^
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night-howl In reply to AquariizaWolf [2009-11-28 18:54:00 +0000 UTC]
yes, this week i just deicovered i also have been drawing a few parts wrong on my cats after 3 years xD very different from a dog/wolf
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taylupe [2009-11-28 07:35:28 +0000 UTC]
aww how cute!!!! love the colors and shading, but.... the eyes are not looking at the leaf, but thats not really important X3
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AquariizaWolf In reply to taylupe [2009-11-28 08:10:40 +0000 UTC]
WOAH now that you mention it, I just noriced that! Oh well. xD
Thank you so much! C:
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