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nightshade-keyblade [2014-06-21 00:32:30 +0000 UTC]
I love this stanza: "there is a mosquito
in here growing fat on the things
i have intended to change"
It just screams out loud and makes the reader want to rouse the speaker out of bed. And yet the speaker goes on, just not giving a damn.
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QuirkyCuriousBex [2014-03-30 01:12:58 +0000 UTC]
Love the detached I-don't-give-a-fuck tone of this. Really nice.
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introverted-ghost [2013-07-07 06:51:02 +0000 UTC]
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Much love,
Ellie.
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introverted-ghost [2013-06-30 11:33:41 +0000 UTC]
I really like this. It has a disconnected feel to it, much like the topic at hand.
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luthor112 [2013-06-12 13:37:30 +0000 UTC]
Interesting poem!
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