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Here it is! The next page featuring everyone's favorite knight of the realm!
I gave this one some extra thought, both in the dialogue, and in the way I was doing the art.

For the dialogue, I was reading through a book on comicing, and looked at the method they used to create a joke. I realized that my joke was really flat because I wasn't setting up the punchline. In this it's a bit obvious that the situation is going to get bad for the knight just based on the dialogue, but I am trying to push in one direction and then jump in the other direction so it actually is funny.

For the art, I was thinking that leaving in the pencil lines before scanning gave it more shading and character, but after trying it both ways with this page, I like the cleaner look, and it actually looked less white-washed than the other one.

Also, I'm thinking that an every-other-week schedule is going to be the reality of my situation.

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Here it is! The next page featuring everyone's favorite knight of the realm!
I gave this one some extra thought, both in the dialogue, and in the way I was doing the art.

For the dialogue, I was reading through a book on comicing, and looked at the method they used to create a joke. I realized that my joke was really flat because I wasn't setting up the punchline. In this it's a bit obvious that the situation is going to get bad for the knight just based on the dialogue, but I am trying to push in one direction and then jump in the other direction so it actually is funny.

For the art, I was thinking that leaving in the pencil lines before scanning gave it more shading and character, but after trying it both ways with this page, I like the cleaner look, and it actually looked less white-washed than the other one.

Also, I'm thinking that an every-other-week schedule is going to be the reality of my situation.

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