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Aquin7777 — On a Mountain Darkly pg1
Published: 2010-08-26 09:38:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 309; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Being a rather weak goblin, Gran Grift became the subject of an experiment to create a new undead. However, Gran did not rise, and was discarded in the city's junkyard.This comic was a real learning experience in both scanning images and making comic pages. I know there a lot of faults here, but I am rather pleased with this work.
I penciled and inked this first, but everything I did in Photoshop covers that.
The robed guys tried to combine the traits of a vampire and a lesser bonedrinker ( ed3.5 MM3)
I'll post and link the second page when I get it done. Any critiques, comments, and suggestions are very welcome.
D&D is copyright WOTC
The second page: [link]
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Comments: 2
Nice artwork.
Two changes I might make would be to make the comic larger when posting (It's a bit hard to see some of the panels since they get too small)
and I'm curious to know what the robed creatures were saying.
It's funny that the warlords starting kicking their 'failed' experiment, but without your explanation at the bottom of what was going on, I was a bit confused. The junkyard scene in particular is a bit hard to follow because of how tiny the panels get. The last three panels, however, are excellently done.
I hope you get the next one up soon!
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Sorry to take so long to get to this.
Yes, the small panels are one of the problems with this, and I will make sure to have nice big easy to read panels when I'm finished with the rest of the pages. I had originally planned on just two pages, but now I'm thinking that this may require three or more in the end.
Thank you for your comment, especially with how the page succeeded and failed.
As for what the robed guys are saying, it's just magic sounding(latin?) words that are them casting the spell. But I guess a better way to communicate that would have been a bunch of magic symbols rather than just squiggly lines.
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