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Araahiel — Falling
Published: 2007-11-04 02:54:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description I am fading away,
Drifting farther than anyone can reach;
Someone please catch me.

A cloud moves slower than me;
It is my heart that is hard to breach.
I am fading away.

A hand clings to me,
A dream within the stars;
Someone please catch me.

There is no sun with its warm rays of light.
The dark is what consumes me.
I am fading away.

I do not mind the rain;
It hides my tears, fears.
Someone please catch me.

Waiting for something,
For what, who's to say.
I am fading away,
Someone please catch me.
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Comments: 6

Josie-mouse [2007-11-04 05:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow that is so awsomness. I love it. fantastic form as well

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Araahiel In reply to Josie-mouse [2007-11-04 22:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And thanks for the fav!

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Josie-mouse In reply to Araahiel [2007-11-05 05:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Hey it was my pleasure

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Moonlit-Dreamscape [2007-11-04 05:10:47 +0000 UTC]

I loved it!
A wonderful villanelle!
No, I so didn't look up the name for it. >>
Hehe.

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Araahiel In reply to Moonlit-Dreamscape [2007-11-04 22:54:55 +0000 UTC]

ahhhh... that's what's it's called! Thanks.

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fadingsunlight [2007-11-04 03:12:58 +0000 UTC]

I really like this and am still intrigued by the form ^_^

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