Moonlit-Dreamscape [2007-09-07 01:09:37 +0000 UTC]
It's very you, definitely, and I loved how you wrote everything out. =] It's like I was listening to you talk the whole time, and got to see a glimpse of another side of you.
You asked for constructive criticism?
Um...
There isn't really anything to critique.
It's all you, I can't criticize yourself as a person.
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Araahiel In reply to Moonlit-Dreamscape [2007-09-07 23:03:51 +0000 UTC]
^_^ Thanks. It does need edited though. If you people haven't noticed, I haven't edited it much yet. Are there any small 'editations' that you see that I might have missed?
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fadingsunlight [2007-09-07 00:24:32 +0000 UTC]
I like, I like! Very poetic and descriptive. I like it's voice a lot ^_^
I say A+!
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Araahiel In reply to fadingsunlight [2007-09-07 00:31:02 +0000 UTC]
Yay!! Thank you! That's all I need, is for a friend to honestly like something I write! ^_^ I've been doing well on voice lately... any constructive criticism?
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