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aramintaXkazemaru — Pinkie at the Gala
Published: 2013-01-03 02:31:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1047; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 33
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This was so much fun to draw, & I'm overwhelmed at the outcome ^-^ I love it so much. Expect more humanizations of scenes in the future!
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INCOMING BRUTAL HONEST OPINION. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!
While the idea itself is incredibly funny and cool, perhaps the most work needs to be done is, well, the drawing itself. The pencil crayon strokes are easily noticeable, and while in many situations noticeable pencil crayon strokes can be used in an effective manner, here they do not contribute to the shape of anything within the picture at all.
Another major problem is the proportions. To give an example, one of Pinkie's arms is much more noticeably longer than the other, as well as having an awkardly placed armpit. Another problem is the awkward appearance of Octavia's pose. While it is true I get the impression that she's meant to look like she's falling to her demise (the ground), her legs appear to be awkwardly placed.
More work needs to be done in general. Revising alone will not be enough at this point.
Still, I did get a bit of laughs from this picture. Hopefully next time a better version can be seen.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to write all this out for me. It was definitely difficult to translate pony anatomy into human anatomy. I will continue practicing & developing my skills!
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By all means!
Keep practicing!
Thanks for taking the time to read my critique.
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You reach your right hoof in
You reach your right hoof out
You reach your right hoof in
And you shake it all about
You do the Pony Pokey meeting lots of folks with clout
That's what I'm talking about
You step your left hoof in
You pull it right back out
You step your left hoof in
But you better help him out
You do the Pony Pokey but should find a different route
That's what it's all about
You kick your back left in
You pull your back left out
You reach your back left in
Just be brave and have no doubt
You do the Pony Pokey feeling like you're gonna pout
That's what I'm singing about
You tilt your head in
You tilt your head out
You tilt your head in
Then you shake it all about
You do the Pony Pokey even though your date's a lout
You're better off without
You stomp your whole self in
You stomp your whole self out
You stomp your whole self in
And you stomp yourself about
You do the Pony Pokey and you give a little shout-
Fluttershy: COME OUT!
[Pinkie Pie]
That's what I'm talking about
You do the Pony Pokey
You do the Pony Pokey
You do the Pony Pokey
And that's what it's all about
Yeah!
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Lyrica: Young lady, this is NOT that kind of party.
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Pinkie: Ohhhhhhhhhhhh! This ponies do not want party?
These ponies Want a real PARTY!!
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GREATEST THING EVER!
love pinkie pie dancing XD
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either that or the WORST. POSSIBLE. THING.
xD j/k Thanks
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Thanks! Her face was one of the first things I did in this picture. I wanted to make sure I got across her terrified expression, along with the shock of Pinkie knocking her over. lol
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You definitely got it across. Awesome job
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Thank you so much! ^-^
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Best part that the Season 1 finale (At the Gala) had to offer.
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Pinkie Pie is absolutely hilarious. xD
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Which is why her and Pinkamena Diane Pie will forever be best pony.
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"Young lady, this is NOT that kind of party". - Lyrica
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