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DarkGoddessK [2009-02-11 23:23:16 +0000 UTC]
I love this!!! *anime eyes* Finish?
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arc-ician In reply to DarkGoddessK [2009-02-12 16:35:02 +0000 UTC]
I'll see if I can tie down the muse that passed by that day. I haven't had much to work with and, in re-reading this one, I saw way too much room for improvement, but I'll see what I can do.
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DarkGoddessK In reply to arc-ician [2009-02-13 02:49:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much... ^^ I loved where this was going. Alot. ^^
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moonlightvamp [2008-06-10 04:59:04 +0000 UTC]
oooooh, i like this...especially how you have the characters speech all proper...er, unproper i guess in this instance...i have a firefly fiv myself if you're interested, in my gallery under "KBDF"
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Elorine [2008-01-23 13:13:58 +0000 UTC]
All right, I've sent in my vote. I've a slight problem with a word in the last sentence, however.
but a bit more respectively... you know, since he's the Captain and all.
Did you mean it that way? Respectively, to me anyway, means "in that order". At first, I thought you'd written "respectfully", because that's what makes sense when I read the sentence, but then I saw it wasn't the case when I read it over again. Dunno...
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arc-ician In reply to Elorine [2008-04-12 04:23:03 +0000 UTC]
I know it's been a long damn time since you wrote this comment, but I figured I should respond, since I have no idea now, where I even thought I was going with this and, for now, it's kinda dead in the water, as they say.
Anyway, yes, I did mean respectively. Precisely because it isn't the right word. However, you can still read the sentence and know what I meant when I wrote it. Which, to me, is all that matters. I'm the kind of person who will sacrifice grammatical correctness for that personal flare. I would expect you would know that by now, Cathy. Geez.
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