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jokinglydepressed [2015-07-21 22:50:11 +0000 UTC]

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Now this is a very cute piece. There is a strong sense of friendship here that I love.

As a whole though, when drawing, take a step back and look at this.
From an audience's point of view, even though we get the gist of what you were trying to show, it looks off. We get that it is a fun piece, but the way you chose to do the poses makes it look very awkward.

Anatomy would need some more work. I would like to see perhaps a bit more work on the faces, and the shading doesn't need to be as dark as you have it.

As a personal mission, try practicing with armor a bit more. There are plenty of photos and tutorials out there on the web and on the site.

All in all, you did a good job!

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EquisEspada [2015-03-16 03:22:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm a little tired right now so I'm gonna make this quick.

Angle is profile which equals boring
anatomy needs work
facial structure is too simple in comparison to the body.
Background is half-assed
perspective on background is terrible. 

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PuNK-A-CaT [2015-03-12 20:21:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey cool, it came out looking really good

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chelano [2015-03-12 20:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice detail and bright colors.  Very cool.

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