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Comments: 11

Imm-o [2017-06-07 16:15:40 +0000 UTC]

WHEW!
The whole thing in one night! Proud of myself ^^

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yusuke96 [2017-01-09 23:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Can we get some colored pages? I would love to see that beam struggle of Yamcha vs Goku in color.

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Aremke In reply to yusuke96 [2017-01-10 04:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, I probably won't color it. Sorry, it's just too time consuming when I have more pages to draw. You're not the first person to ask though. It surprises me, because that's actually one of my least favorite pages, but people seem to love it haha.

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yusuke96 In reply to Aremke [2017-01-12 06:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, what do you expect. It was an intense moment with both of their symbols above them. You should be proud, I don't see too much of that in other fan mangas.

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Teoma-The-Naraotor [2017-01-09 19:30:00 +0000 UTC]

I really do like your story can I ask you something ?

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Aremke In reply to Teoma-The-Naraotor [2017-01-09 19:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Sure, go ahead.

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Teoma-The-Naraotor In reply to Aremke [2017-01-09 22:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Can I took some of your idea like the four school and yamcha badass technic they are so well that I doubt I can think of something better

You are one of the few fanmangaka that I like on Dragon Ball.

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Aremke In reply to Teoma-The-Naraotor [2017-01-10 04:22:40 +0000 UTC]

Take my ideas? I appreciate that you asked, and thank you for the compliment, but I'm curious what you want to do with them.

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Teoma-The-Naraotor In reply to Aremke [2017-01-10 08:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Well first your idea of the Ookami school is nice for backstory and increase DB background, having four school for teach many ways of martial arts is nice. I like ho you connect the thing toΒ Mutaito,Β I find it useful only for the lore for concistancy.

As for Yamcha Technic and Martial Arts you create. In my story he will survive Nappa and Vegeta arrival because Raditz will survive and side with the Z-Team only Chaoz and Piccolo will die in the process, He will go to Namek in the first wave with Bulma, Kuririn and Gohan, the second wave will consist of Tien, Goku and Raditz. My story is set to implement into the canon, movies, OVAs, TVs Special some games material and the infamous Dragon Ball GT. All of that will be rewritten for concistancy.

For exemple Broly and His Father will be fugitive being hunted by Cooler henshmen and Cooler himself for a sick games, They will end up on Earth and Broly will awaken his Super Saiyan state here and with Goku's help he will beat Cooler, Keeping him arround in the Cell games Broly will sacrifice himself instead of C-16.

Also to that I will add also my own Dragon Ball ideas, you can check my gallery for see them.

In Yamcha technic I like the idea of the True Roga FuFu Ken form and The Genki Sokidan. My Yamcha will be less a slacker, He would have trained with Goku since their first meeting making him trained along with Kuririn and Goku in the first arc of Dragon Ball, He would have developpe a fierce rivalry with Tien. And instead of being with Bulma he would have developped a relationship with Lanfan.

See I'd like only to pick your historical idea of the four school for mytho value, and Yamcha Technic because they are just so perfect for him.

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Aremke In reply to Teoma-The-Naraotor [2017-01-11 17:15:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh sure, if you want to do your own fanfiction, go ahead.

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Teoma-The-Naraotor In reply to Aremke [2017-01-11 17:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and anyway you are one of the best fanmangaka so keep it up I can't wait to read Elsewhere until its end

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