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DonPuno [2019-05-05 17:33:31 +0000 UTC]
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Hi Argolith,
I love that you used the topic Pareidolia for this photograph and indeed, you've hit the nail on the head. After reading the photograph's title "Watching You" and realizing that the windows create a pair of eyes, it was more than clear what you'd like to express. Chapeau!
That's the reason, why I rated the vision with five stars. Moreover, I deeply love the way how you've managed to give to photograph depth. The use of reflections in the windows show that very well. Additionally, it is great how you've maden use of the rule of thirds in combination with color usage. In this way, you've not merely limited the rule of thirds to the plain geometrical arrangement of elements, you've even used only three main color: Blue, orange and beige. Good eye!
Consequently, it influences the photograph's impact very positively. Nice and harmonic structures, a good clarity and horizontal straight lines, underline the positve impact. Apart from that, the windows's reflections show very well, that the opposite building has a different architecture. It seems, as if it's much older. The windows seem to have wooden frames. It makes me curious to see more of that building.
In that context, the topic Pareidolia is very well chosen of you. As you can get from my critique already, theres a lot of speculation about the windows's reflection which shows very well, that it depends a lot about the point of view what you see and what you won't see.
All in all, I love that photograph. The only point of improvement I see, would be the parallelism of vertical lines. If you improve the vertical perspective distortion this photograph will be far beyond from good. It'll be outstanding!
Greetings,
DonPuno
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Argolith In reply to DonPuno [2019-05-07 12:09:44 +0000 UTC]
Hello DonPuno.
Thank you very much for taking the time to write this critique. It is interesting to me that you put so much emphasis on the building visible in the reflection. To be honest, I don't recall details about that particular building.
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ikazon [2019-11-21 19:11:55 +0000 UTC]
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Argolith In reply to ikazon [2019-11-23 14:47:29 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it, thank you.
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Argolith In reply to Canankk [2019-10-01 12:17:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot!
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Thinking-Silence [2019-05-25 10:35:10 +0000 UTC]
Glückwunsch zur DD!
Sehr schöne Aufnahme, auch die Farben passen perfekt.
Ich seh auch überall Gesichter
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Argolith In reply to Thinking-Silence [2019-05-25 12:06:41 +0000 UTC]
Vielen Dank!
Ja, ich schätze du hättest eher ein Problem, wenn es nicht so wäre.
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Argolith In reply to KizukiTamura [2019-05-08 15:56:57 +0000 UTC]
You did it again -- thank you!
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JJPoatree [2019-04-17 01:43:26 +0000 UTC]
ongrats on the DD!
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Argolith In reply to Pierre-Lagarde [2019-04-15 12:17:54 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it. Thank you very much!
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Argolith In reply to KizukiTamura [2019-04-13 07:31:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. Without you featuring this picture in so many groups, it may not have happened. So thanks again!
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7Bugs [2019-04-12 14:07:29 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on the DD!
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Argolith In reply to 7Bugs [2019-04-13 07:30:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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JJPoatree [2019-04-01 22:55:26 +0000 UTC]
excellent capture! ❤
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KizukiTamura [2019-03-28 18:37:59 +0000 UTC]
Dialed-In - Weekly feature - V12
Old Mornings Dawn by Onodrim-Photography
somewhere nowhere by yv
Watching You by Argolith
Portrait by kopalov
Thunder And Rain by Thinking-Silence
Direction by greystarlight
Oblivion by MilanVopalensky
:icondialed-in::icondialed-in::icondialed-in:
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Season-5 [2019-03-27 17:49:25 +0000 UTC]
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ancoben [2019-03-27 16:33:54 +0000 UTC]
great image, I agree we see faces in patterns
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Argolith In reply to ancoben [2019-03-28 13:15:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the feedback.
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ancoben In reply to Argolith [2019-03-28 16:45:15 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
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KizukiTamura [2019-03-26 17:38:09 +0000 UTC]
Superb !
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Argolith In reply to KizukiTamura [2019-03-27 15:00:10 +0000 UTC]
Coming from you that means a lot to me. Thank you!
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