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Published: 2007-11-13 07:18:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2613; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 79
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A page spread of manga book I'm doing...Related content
Comments: 15
The penmanship is top notch but the layout is too cluttered. You should make what you want the reader to look immediately really stand out instead of cramming so much together like this.
For example, at first glance the arm holding the sword seems disembodied. The old man with the glasses' pants over-complicate his part of the picture.
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Uh-huh...note taken. Thank you for the comment. I'll keep that in mind next time.
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looks sweet dude! love the solid blacks. cool combo of styles going into this one!
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Awesome how you can switch from one style to another and to a bang-up job everytime!! Great skills!!
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Gee, thanks! That's flattering.
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Cool job!!! I saw the first volume of this in our CEO's office. Love your work there! We work in partnership with the publisher kasi 
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Hindi eh. Sa US lang yata distribution niya. Kahit nga ako, di ko alam kung magkakaro'n ako ng compli nito hak hak!
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