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Tillydae [2011-05-10 00:03:46 +0000 UTC]

wow! i love the way that you made his expression, and the red in the sharingan eyes is so deep. plus, i love the detail in his right eye, it's so realistic!!! great work!

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Hyperfisk [2011-05-03 16:54:33 +0000 UTC]

you asked for somne comments on this, so I'll find some stuff.
first of all, you need to define a point of focus. I am not sure of where to look, and on a drawing like this, any person should be able to point out exactly where to look. you can control this with contrast- light against dark og dark against light. the biggest contrast should be on at the focus point.
also this is confusing - is he using his right or his left hand to remove the cloth from his face? based on the angle of his arm, I would say his left hand. but what you drew was the right hand - the thumb should be on the other side. this kind of mistake is much more common than you would think.
and one last thing: the blood really needs some care. The blood should be running down. but what you have done is ending the bloody lines in sharp points - here is where the drop of blood should actually be. This is kind of important.

other than that, it is a nice drawing. nice lightning on the face, although a bit soft, it looks nice.
hope those where some useful comments. - hopefully no hard feelings or anything.

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TheCommissarFangirl [2011-05-03 16:39:30 +0000 UTC]

This looks pretty cool n_n

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cerebraleye [2011-05-03 04:46:31 +0000 UTC]

This is so much better! Fantastic job on this! the saturation of color is great, you hit the contrast out of the park! Lettering if very nice. Now for the critic. The red eye by the fingures is a bit too hidden, Plus the color on that eye and the eyes in the are are too different from the eye in the mans head that is darker, muted in color. Work on unifying the colors so you can have a piece that is seen as one piece. When the colors are so different like that it makes the piece look like two different pieces in one. If you mute the eyes saturation so it matches the left eye in the face then I think this will unify the piece more. As for the blood on the hand, you need a more organic feel to it. Having such a hard , sharp, edge makes it look more like a tattoo over the skin then liquid on the skin. Round out your edges, use heavier line under the shadowed areas and thin out the line weight (size) where areas of light hit the subject. Great to see the amount of work you are putting out! Keep up the cool work!

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bwu-gween-ish-wuv [2011-05-02 23:58:01 +0000 UTC]

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awesome

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Stealth-Gee [2011-05-02 21:21:42 +0000 UTC]

I think this one is much better than the first one,
for one the text looks alot better there, rather than on the character's head. I didn't personally like it obstructing the face area (sorry!)

Once again, the lighting is really good on your work, i like the definitions in the tones. I think abit of lighting on the lips might bring some more life to it , but that's completely your choice. I'm not telling you to. Its a suggestion.

I think the smoke effect was wonderful on the last piece, and i think it would look nice on this too!

Overall: Wonderful <3, keep it up honey!, sorry if i seemed unfair or mean. >:

x C:

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SuperLiliLalala [2011-05-02 13:45:55 +0000 UTC]

This is better than the first but you should put smoke on this one too ~
but good job :3

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X-Kite-X [2011-05-02 11:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Thats amazing, great job!
Think i might just press +Watch >.>

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