Daecus [2014-07-21 15:16:57 +0000 UTC]
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You did very well with the proportions this time! Very good! You also succeeded in making the keyblade metallic, something that I see you skirting around in other works. I really like the background, too! A suggestion: since both arms are thrown more behind the girl, the stitching on the arm for the jacket on the left should apply to the right, as well. Making the chest more symmetrical would have made the posing look a little better. The belly button and muscle need to face the left a little, since the hips are facing more to the left. For the socks(?), one of the socks looks bigger than the other.Overall, great work. You did better than you normally do! ^^
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Biding [2015-11-28 23:48:16 +0000 UTC]
I love the design of the Keyblade, and the sea, moon, and sky are likewise gorgeous. Β The legs and mouth seem a little uncentered, but other than that, I can't offer any critiques.
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ArkaDarkArtist In reply to Biding [2015-11-29 00:56:58 +0000 UTC]
The Keyblade was designed by the raffle winner, I just twaked it a little bit.Yeah, at that time I wasn't that good on human (Specially female) anatomy Thanks for the comment