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Shirkee [2018-07-29 17:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I'm Shirkee from and I'm here to comment, tadam!

First of all I like the impression of this art in general, it has the atmosphere, nice colors palette and quality. I can say your lines are very good, not same weight every time, but you change it when it's needed. The only thing here I would suggest it to put stronger lines on eyelashes, because in anime style eyes are the most important structures. Now they are kinda transparent, so I suggest to emphasize them more. I love how you color the face! It's perfect. The same for the rest of the body. Maybe I would add some shadows on the bag shoulder, because now it looks a little flat. Huge plus is the background. The sky looks marvelous! I love the colors and shading and how pink-orange go smoothly into blue-gray, also the clouds and shadows on them! Very professional. But the trees needs more love in my opinion. They look too lightly maybe because of the transparency, then they should. Those trees seem to be huge trees, especially this 2nd from left need stronger shadow. Hmm, that is all in technical part, I suppose. As I wrote in the beginning of this comment, I love the atmosphere in your picture. I did not see the other panels, but from this one I can clearly read that the hero of your story is confused and in troublesome situations and I would gladly learn the story behind it, what makes your art good I love his awkward expression, looks funny and made me feel a bit pity of him What more I can say is to make the text on the bottom more visible. Maybe some contour or shadow behind the letters? You should experiment with it. Because now the bigger part of the text is on the darker background (his T-shirt) but what if the next scenes will require putting the text on lighter background. I think, it something to considerate. Of course it's just mine opinion, but I hope you find something helpful in it. :*

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HazelRose3637 [2018-07-28 07:14:45 +0000 UTC]

I love the background I love sunsets/sunrises, and this one looks really pretty! I also like the trees a lot!

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DeezzArt [2018-07-28 05:04:48 +0000 UTC]

oh my he looks absolutely beautiful ! 

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