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Published: 2009-04-11 06:23:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description Words are water:

the earth is dry –
      awaiting the novella rain,
         guzzling each sporadic drizzle
            of tinkling haiku –

I lean against the shower door,
idly watching lines of poetry
connect and slither down the tiles.
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Comments: 7

nathan-speaks [2009-10-31 21:47:28 +0000 UTC]

I love the juxtaposition of the dramatic desert image with the everyday domestic image. Very nicely done!

Nathan

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arliddian In reply to nathan-speaks [2009-11-01 03:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it.

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YouInventedMe [2009-05-01 00:14:55 +0000 UTC]

a fine return

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arliddian In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-05-01 02:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Thank you! And for the fav also.

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trivium666fan [2009-04-11 06:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Great work (=

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arliddian In reply to trivium666fan [2009-04-11 08:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and thanks for the fav.

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trivium666fan In reply to arliddian [2009-04-11 15:20:30 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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