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Talysia [2009-08-25 00:55:12 +0000 UTC]
I love the emotion in this. The imagery goes hand in hand with it beautifully.
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Talysia In reply to arliddian [2009-08-25 20:41:04 +0000 UTC]
No problem. =]
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seraellis [2009-08-10 09:40:04 +0000 UTC]
I like this, and I know the emotion that urged you to write those last two lines. I would leave them off however - they're too blatant.
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