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armor-alchemist — FMA: Case Mosquito? P3
Published: 2005-03-21 10:49:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 2433; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 986
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Read from RIGHT ---> LEFTNot as worksafe in a sense... o_O;; and yay, P3~... P4 will have to wait till Easter break (dude, I got Math midterm in 3 days! >< )
crappy background + rushed up coloring @@;; (but still took forever)
... Ed looks so cute @@;;; feels weird....
Al fall asleep o_O;;; You're lucky, Ed T_T;; (omg who can guess what happens next when someone unconscious here...)
critiques welcome... but if you plan to bash my plotline (is there even one? @@;; ), then you are not welcomed... I look for drawing/coloring/style/whatever critiques
Edward & Alphonse Elric © Arakawa Hiromu
Done with OC 3.03E Plus, time spent: 6~7 hours... x_O;; there goes my weekend (but well, at the same time I was watching FMA engdub 13-18 + Inu Yasha 140-145 sub...)
Sidenote: Edo is 16 here and Aru is 11 (just restored, lol... body = 11, soul/mind = 15, so his soul and mind are in legal age to have s3x o_O mind you xD... j/k no yaoi here)
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Comments: 52
I think pervy!seme!Edo is much better than uke!girly!Edo lol
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Hey when is the second part of FMA: Happy April's Fool?
gonna come around??I love that comic
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ah, soon... coming soon... 
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But school does come first
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KYAAAAAH! *blushes* sooo kyoote! i love it! i think it looks really good! *cmon ed! give meh some too!!! 
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>.< I want to know what happens next *laughs* >.< i must know
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P4 under construction! xD
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yay *hugs* i love you
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Ha ha ha!! That's cute... read the whole thing. ^^
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xD *draws P4 later*
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GAH and man, I can't stop laughing 
And omg your side notes are so cute! No really...! They're so cute
ummmm since my brain just melted i can't really give you any kind of nice critiques.. X_x; sorry
can't wait for page four
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*freeze your brain back in one piece xD*
It's okay about the critique part... sometimes when I am in a bad mood my little heart can't take them as well as when I am in a a good mood 
just curious, did you saw this at the elricest LJ or...?
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now that my brain is freezed back into one piece I can reply
Glad that you don't mind the critic thing. I'm so bad at that. >_>; Sorry again XD
hahaha I'm glad my comments cheered you up 
I saw this at Elricest LJ using my sneaky ninja techniques of doom
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Ah, I rarely post anything there either... no fanfic skillz here xDDDD (fancomic is easier imo... you don't really need any english skillz except for spelling and grammar o_O)
... *sigh* 3 chem lab due after easter break ==
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hahaha my reasons are diferent though XP because since I'm not english I'm quite afraid of... grammar/ spelling errors O_o; I dunno... I think it's kinda embarrassing, at least for me. So, I can't draw comics either
argh, damn school to hell -_-; *gives you coockies*
Did I ever tell you how much your icon PWNS!? XD cuz it does
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I am just weird o_O I would have the patience to sit by the monitor and draw for a decent 2 ~ 5 hours yet not the patience to spent more than an hour on fanfic xD
That comic just poped out of my head from no where o_O and thursday... just felt like drawing them :3
hehe, I have no idea how my icon is so popular o_O (I only spent 9 minutes thinking + drawing it) but I guess I will stick to it for quite a while x3
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Your chibis are toxically cute. I mean, large amounts of radioactive adorable. 
Looking forward to page 4! (But dont sacrifice your grades for it!!! :serious: )
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Awwww these are really adorable x3 Uber cuteness! I think the picture that you said Al's head looks too big makes it look cute x3
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hehe, thanks! xD Thanks for faving the other 2 pages too!
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XD
I saw this comic on the elricest community, so I had to come comment.
This is *SO* funny. I love it.
For critique - it's a little cluttered with text, which makes it slightly hard to read in places. Really, it's fine, but you asked for a critique.
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yea, I like critiques ---- unless it's super heavy o_O (okiee... since i didn't start drawing with anything until 3~4 months ago, don't expect me to draw as good as Rose... lol)
so those writings ARE a problem... then I will try to not make the same mistake on the later pages (I comment on it too much eh? xD) and yay, thanks for commenting! and the 
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It's not that you comment too much on it, really - but I would suggest maybe outlining the text or making a color that's easier to see - it's really easy digitally to make it READABLE. ^^
And chibicomics are fine if they're not drawn like doujinshi! My chibicomics aren't drawn like my other stuff, either.
And you're very welcome.
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*sends a bat over to bite your neck*
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Awwww~~ Aru fell asleep~~!
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*giggles* xDDD
pervy Ed, I love you >.>
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I bet Al tasted like Gummy Bears! <3 Ed's so Lucky! *Yonk* Fav! =^.^=
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Oh, my...!! XDDDD Rabu rabu!! **^0^** It's so funny!! XDDDDDD I luv pervy scenes... very cool!!
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lol you perv... xDDD
Thanks for the
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Hehehe XDDDD Yesh, I'm such a pervy XDD But with those cute brothers... how can't we be perverts? LOL XDDDD
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o_O You got a problem with that?
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*cries* Armor-alchemist was mean to neko!
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I hate milk...just like Ed!
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That is an agreeable trade!
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The last 3 panels were hilararious. Especially when Al's head finally "plops". XD *takes Al home*
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lol, that was supposed to be devil's horn (I think it looks cuter that way)
cockroach... sure... lol xD (who cares xDDD)
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OMG thsi comic rocks XD XD XD~~
*yayness for the mosquitos...even if I don't like them in my nearness*
it's a cute idea, but in the same time silly and ...so...*lol* XD
*loves it*
Critique? Nah, it's so chibi style ( but I think this wasn't intended right?) you should practice more the form of the faces buit tahts al I can give you for critique ^_^ all you have to to is practice practice practice~ the rest comes with the time ..*nods*
*laughs again* Horny Edo xD
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