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ArmyStrong — The god of the sea... by-nc-nd

Published: 2007-07-02 03:02:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 375; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description This is a "concept" vector for a larger piece I am planning on completing. The larger piece will include all of the Olympians.

This is Poseidon, god of the sea. Please tell me what you think. If you see anything that could improve his overall design please let me know. Other than that I hope you enjoy.
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Comments: 9

BWANASIMBA [2009-04-14 04:24:32 +0000 UTC]

This is a really good drawing. Good job. As for improvements, what emmytonks said, plus I think a crown would look good on the sea god. Oh, and the hands look a little... off. The right hand holding the trident has a crooked middle finger and looks... well, off (big help, I know). Oh, and the left hand's thumb looks far too large in comparison to the other fingers. Also, the left hand's fingers need some more lines outlining said fingers.

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ArmyStrong In reply to BWANASIMBA [2009-04-14 04:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the and the comment. Its seems really difficult to get a critique on Deviant Art sometimes.

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BWANASIMBA In reply to ArmyStrong [2009-04-14 22:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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speedykit [2007-07-02 20:36:07 +0000 UTC]

First of i like his eyes, blue like the back ground.
I'm prity much just going to say the same kinda thing that =emmytonks said, if you want to improve it just add things like bubbles and maybe a bit of a back ground. other then that i like it

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ArmyStrong In reply to speedykit [2007-07-02 21:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...I'm glad you like it. I will definitely be adding some of that to the final Olympians picture. I'm not sure I'm going to update this image (then again I might) since it was only a character concept but the input is great and I really appreciate it.

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emmytonks [2007-07-02 15:08:38 +0000 UTC]

Ah I like it, I really like how you've got his shark tail for the fins, its nice, hmm if you wanted to improve you could add some texture, coral for the throne, or bubbles, curls in his hair, it would make it very more dynamic, but thats really good vector as is.

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ArmyStrong In reply to emmytonks [2007-07-02 15:47:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I might see about adding some of that in the Olympians picture I plan on doing. Thanks for the input!

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ajwaho [2007-07-02 12:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Poseidon. Great! I want to see whole picture...

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ArmyStrong In reply to ajwaho [2007-07-02 14:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the I'm glad you liked it! Unfortunately, it will be a little while before I get to the final piece (real work has to come first ). But when I do I'll send you a note.

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