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animeotakuartist [2018-07-19 08:07:24 +0000 UTC]
The first one after a long time huh? There's so much improvement it's amazing! :-:
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Decapitated-Kittens [2018-07-11 22:09:15 +0000 UTC]
I would work on playing with outline color a bit more.
The color outline you chose for the hair works really well, but on the skin, the color for the outline makes it a little hard to focus on some of the details, especially on the face; although I do like the eyelash color choice, it gives a soft look to her.
I think the shape of the torso is nice, good job on that.
My last critique would be on the nose. Like I saw stated before, it is a tad cartoony for the style you're giving off. You can still achieve a pointy nose look that is kind of cartoony in this sort of style, but it is a tad bit too long and thin at the end.
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AroojBasit In reply to Decapitated-Kittens [2018-07-12 04:51:54 +0000 UTC]
Hm, all good and valid points!
I'll keep them all in mind in my next piece, and I hope if you see it, you can see that I tried! :3
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AroojBasit In reply to peachesSin [2018-07-11 17:56:51 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you so much for your detailed critique!
I donno what my art style is now! oh no!
I thought her pearl was supposed to be huge ;_;
Welp, I tried my best, I'm glad you like it though!!
Thank you again!!
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