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Pepsi-CoIa [2014-04-15 15:51:26 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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lanternjoe [2012-02-14 05:13:07 +0000 UTC]
'cause this is Thriller! Thriller night...
What? Oh, right. Get into writing mode...
Beautiful, innit? But they still don't care. And so you once again find yourself utterly alone. Oh yes, you have your attendants, you have that colt. But everypony outside of that tiny, tiny social circle wants nothing to do with you. Just burns you up inside, doesn't it? Doesn't it hurt that once again, the world is quick to bury you?
For a thousand years, you were a boogeyman, nothing more. A tale used to frighten children. She told me, some time between then and now, that she hid the truth of your existence from countless generations because it hurt her too much to be reminded of you. Bet that made a thousand years pass so much quicker, eh?
You wanna know something? As far as I know, you were supposed to stay up there forever. You were a lost cause to her. Your sister, who supposedly loves you more than anything in the world, wrote you off. She would've abandoned you. You know first hoof how long a thousand years is. Imagine how long forever would be... Are you crying? What am I saying, of course you're crying. You're pathetic; always were, one way or another.
It's funny. The one saying all these hurtful things to you is the only one who wants you to aspire to a higher station than Princess for a Night.
Trust in me, dear. Surrender yourself to me. I am the Master, and you will obey me...
Just imagine that there's dialogue from Luna in there.
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lanternjoe In reply to Arrkhal [2012-02-16 22:59:13 +0000 UTC]
I think this guy being the Master works so much more than him being the Fifth Doctor, don't you?
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Arrkhal In reply to lanternjoe [2012-02-16 23:13:42 +0000 UTC]
Hm, depends on which Master. I wanna see a pony version of the 2nd one!
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Arrkhal In reply to lanternjoe [2012-02-16 23:43:14 +0000 UTC]
Very weird, I never even noticed her.
And I dunno, Pratt was much scarier than NMM.
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lanternjoe In reply to Arrkhal [2012-02-17 00:08:33 +0000 UTC]
Too much so for a NMMified Whooves to be based on him?
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Arrkhal In reply to lanternjoe [2012-02-17 00:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Might be. Hm, it'd depend on how ponified he was.
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NemesisPyro [2012-01-30 22:31:24 +0000 UTC]
Well, the light of the moon warms me. It's a comforting feeling, moonlight. Soothing. A feeling of security. The sun shines down harshly, searing all in its path in a fit of dominance. The moon, it shines without glaring, without malice, without pain. The moon is my sun.
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drax99 [2012-01-29 23:05:43 +0000 UTC]
nicely done, but her forehooves look backwards...
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Arrkhal In reply to drax99 [2012-01-29 23:24:01 +0000 UTC]
Ponies bend their arms like that all the time. [link] [link] [link] etc. They seem to shapeshift between horse and human forelimbs at will.
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drax99 In reply to Arrkhal [2012-01-30 08:27:09 +0000 UTC]
Yes yes, Marshmallows and pipe cleaners, lol. But it seems out of place in this setting.
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Arrkhal In reply to drax99 [2012-01-30 12:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Dunno, she's just supposed to be lifting the moon. By holding the bottom. Or maybe gesturing like she's conducting an orchestra. "Loooouuuuuddeeeeeerrr!"
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drax99 In reply to Arrkhal [2012-01-30 17:12:42 +0000 UTC]
Yea, I understand what you were trying to do, and on a human, it would be appropriate, but it looks subtly wrong on a pony. I think the hoof ornaments kinda aggravate the issue. 90% of the time their hooves point down, and having them point up kinda looks like their fetlock is broken.
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JoelDashReed [2012-01-29 21:38:10 +0000 UTC]
The title reminded me the song "Astronomy"... oohh.. yeah, the reference. XD
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EdwardStone2995 [2012-01-29 21:27:08 +0000 UTC]
I'm really liking this. Nice work!
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