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Published: 2014-02-23 23:12:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 420; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description I don't know what to say about it...

  

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elixir-studios [2014-02-23 23:27:56 +0000 UTC]

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Mane/forelock: I love what I see of the forelock I just wish I could see the rest of the mane!!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title=" (Sad)"/>
Lighting: The lighting is not exactly how it should be it takes away from the manip looking amazing!!!
Legs:The fur on the hooves is a bit iffy but oh well....also the hooves don't look that much blended into the background and stuff.
Taile.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="377" title=" (Eek)"/>MG i love the pretty tail!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="37" height="25" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="600" title=""/> I want it sooo bad lol
Other: The horse does not look like it fits perfectly in with the background it looks mostly pasted on there......that probably has something to do with the lighting.
Overall: I really love it!!! I hope I was not to bad at the critiquing and I hope it helps...and doesn't hurt your feelings

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RaiRaiEra [2014-02-27 20:25:06 +0000 UTC]

The back leg kind of looks like it's cutting cleanly into the tail, this bothers me. o.o

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decipherGraphix [2014-02-24 17:01:55 +0000 UTC]

I think this looks great. Just a couple of things, the rear right leg, the lighting isn't really right, i'd add some more dodge/burn around the edges of that leg, just to keep in check with the light source. I'd also recommend taking a light smudge brush around all of the edges on the horse, as the front legs look a little.. too straight. I must say, i think this horse fits the background perfectly! I do have to agree with Ladybug about the tail, but i'd also like to see more of the mane. I think a mid-length flowy mane would be perfect! Overall, i think this is beautiful!

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ArrowStudios In reply to decipherGraphix [2014-02-24 17:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the help! I will definitely fix it when I have the time (: 

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decipherGraphix In reply to ArrowStudios [2014-02-24 17:06:57 +0000 UTC]

hope it helps. 

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infinescence [2014-02-23 23:25:10 +0000 UTC]

I really like it, but I think you should add a shadow? or am I not seeing it 0.0 idk

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ArrowStudios In reply to infinescence [2014-02-23 23:33:43 +0000 UTC]

I keep forgetting the shadow.. .-.

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