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Description EDIT: could people please tell me whether you think she's a Mary Sue or not? i have a suspicion she is...


I might as well finally put up one of my characters info. I mean, i've had her for a year now.

Name: Nuhima
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Home: Land of Waves
Rank: last official level recorded was Genin, but currently is unknown
Chakra Element: Air and Water (kekkei genkai of ice manipulation)
Family: belongs to the same clan as Haku
Personality: stubborn, loud, cocky, not the smartest, reckless, suicidal

Life Story: Once a quiet and shy girl, Nuhima clung to her parents for love and protection. She wasn't the best at making friends and rarely spoke to anyone. At the age of 12 Nuhima's neighbors attacked her family out of fear of their kekkei genkai. Nuhima ran while her parents stayed and fought. Returning a few hours later, Nuhima discovered her parents dead, and she fled the country.
For four years she wandered alone, afraid of other people and avoiding large populations. At the age of 16 she was offered an opportunity to join Akatsuki's ranks, as Akatsuki was looking for rare kekkei genkai's. Nuhima agreed, thinking that perhaps joining a group of dangerous criminals would be better than living alone, and would be her easy ticket to her grave.

She's not the smartest or strongest person, but she's quite fast. Ice being her main weapon, her knowledge of ninjutsu is decent, but her knowledge of genjutsu is dreadful.

Her goal in life is to die a violent death- to join her family in the afterlife as quickly as possible.
She's quite reckless and doesn't consider personal safety.

Staying with Akatsuki has influenced her quiet and shy personality. As of now she is loud and stubborn, a real bitch if you get her going. Starts fights easily, anything to die quickly.


LE GASP! the end.
If you read all that, you get a cookie.

pssht oh yeah, in Shippuden she ends up dying by Pein's hand. yay.
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Comments: 20

RenNoMikoto [2010-09-27 07:21:07 +0000 UTC]

wahhaaa ha..i really thought it was that bitch...they have the same hair color..but it wasn't...it was a pretty witch!awesome work

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arswiss In reply to RenNoMikoto [2010-09-27 20:39:28 +0000 UTC]

haha thank you! Who were you originally thinking of?

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Orokana-Hime [2010-02-09 04:57:46 +0000 UTC]

cookie i can has? i read all yes.

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arswiss In reply to Orokana-Hime [2010-02-09 05:08:22 +0000 UTC]



don't get a cavity
thanks for reading what's your opinion?

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Orokana-Hime In reply to arswiss [2010-02-09 05:25:45 +0000 UTC]

haha whoopy! xD

hmm i think it's KIND of mary sue-ish. But i think once you've revised her a little (like ALL good OC owners do) she'll be in good shape it's impossible for a naruto OC NOT to be a little mary-sue-ish xD haha

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arswiss In reply to Orokana-Hime [2010-02-09 21:43:03 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah. even the canon characters are Mary-Sueish, i mean, look at Danzou and Sasuke!

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Orokana-Hime In reply to arswiss [2010-02-10 20:02:42 +0000 UTC]

and Naruto for that matter.

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PERS0NVSW0RLD [2010-01-31 01:41:29 +0000 UTC]

yay give me my cookie!!

hmm shes not a mary-sue.. shes not perfect ( NO ONE is )
I like her! awesome picture btw, she does look liked she'd be a bitch sometimes XD (thats a compliment.. it just doesn't seem like one)

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arswiss In reply to PERS0NVSW0RLD [2010-01-31 02:58:08 +0000 UTC]

haha i know what you mean
can't forget this!
and thanks!

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NarutoSpoony [2010-01-12 16:19:46 +0000 UTC]

I like this a lot

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arswiss In reply to NarutoSpoony [2010-01-12 18:24:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Farorna [2010-01-11 22:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Gah, first of all, your art just keeps getting more and more awesome.

As for whether or not Nuhima is a Mary Sue, I honestly don't think she is. Admittedly, her being in the Akatsuki is a bit Sue-ish. However, it all depends on how well the story is written. (That is, if you're writing a story for her, hahaha.)
If you play up the weaknesses and faults of an OC enough to balance out the Sue-y aspects of an OC's personality, it usually makes for a pretty good story. It's also good that you've established faults and weaknesses for Nuhima; it makes her more relatable.

Overall, lovely OC! I look forward to learning more about her. c:

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arswiss In reply to Farorna [2010-01-12 00:21:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your in depth reply

i know, her being Akatsuki is slightly Sue-ish. I really wanted a bad character though, and i was like "Oh hey! Akatsuki!" Derp.

But yeah, i made sure i had enough faults for her to balance it all out.
And yes, i am writing a story for her, BUT IT WILL NEVER SEE THE LIGHT OF DA. I don't know, I personally think its lame lame lame sauce... mebe i'll post something small one day. MEBE.

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Farorna In reply to arswiss [2010-01-12 20:47:05 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome. c:

Please do! I'm sure it's not lame sauce at all, hahaha. Tell you what: if you ever post some of Nuhima's story, I'll post some of MY OC's crappy story. woooo

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arswiss In reply to Farorna [2010-01-12 21:28:18 +0000 UTC]

ACK its a deal.

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Iwachanmaya [2010-01-11 22:02:41 +0000 UTC]

AWESOEM <3 I just love the way you color ....and draw XDDDDDDD btw I want a cookie now XD

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arswiss In reply to Iwachanmaya [2010-01-12 00:09:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks ma dear!

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Iwachanmaya In reply to arswiss [2010-01-12 10:56:40 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome
that's not a real cookie TT_TT

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arswiss In reply to Iwachanmaya [2010-01-12 18:24:55 +0000 UTC]

... oh well

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Iwachanmaya In reply to arswiss [2010-01-18 20:11:34 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDDDD

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