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Art-Zealot — Nine Guesses [Book Club RP Excerpt]

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Published: 2016-04-05 14:00:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 3468; Favourites: 145; Downloads: 8
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Description     A bright, flame-red petal from a flowering gulmohar tree drifted in on the breeze, so close that Tris was tempted to snatch it out of the air. It would have been a simple matter as a Sybal, but as it was she preferred not to make a fool of herself—even in such amicable company. Instead she simply nodded towards the tree, which stood outside the courtyard, barely visible through the ornate lattice of pillars.
    “Can you guess how many trees there are in the temple?” she said, quirking one eyebrow at Marron.

    Where Tristine was unable to reach forward for fear of making a fool of herself, Marron had no such qualms. Following her gaze, he stretched out his arm and snatched the petal in his wide palm before holding it out to her with a smirk. Only mildly damaged.
    “That depends,” he replied brightly. “Do I get anything if I guess correctly?”
    What’s my incentive!

    She took the proffered petal, running her thumb over its rippled surface as she thought. “Hmmmm… how about a story?”

    A story? That seemed awfully fitting for a fragrant morning in Shri Panch, waiting for the rest of Darshil's book club to gather.
    Awfully fitting.
    Marron frowned ever so slightly, though the smile lingered on his lips. "S'pose those'll be acceptable terms...do I have to get it on the nose, or is there room for error?"

    Tris tucked the flower petal behind her ear. “It’s quite a specific number, I’m afraid. But I’ll give you nine guesses.” She braced her hand on the cushion, leaned forward, and smiled expectantly.

    Aw, shite. Marron knew he was in trouble, just by the look on her face.
But, this was a game—a game with Tris, no less, and while after two centuries he knew that he so rarely won these, he would never pass one up. There was a reason he had picked her as his Minister, after all.
You can read the whole RP HERE!

Before I get to the RP details, I just want to confess that good lord, this friendship makes me so happeh. Usually it takes a lot more time/effort to chip through Tristine's daytime formality, but Marron presents an exasperating conundrum. A majority of their relationship over the past century or so was cultivated at night, as Sybals. Combined with the fact that they both have pretty similar views on Sybal nature and the truths it reveals about a person, there's an Understanding between them that makes it difficult for Tris to take herself too seriously in his presence. Unfortunately, that also means she's prone to getting legitimately angry with him if she thinks he's abusing that understanding to make her look/act foolish during the day.

Don't push your luck, mon amie...  *lookin' at'chu gesture*


RP Details:
Length:
Medium

Word Count:
11,046 Words

Characters:

Marron  (Leunbrund )
Darshil  (Turtle-Arts )
Tristine (Art-Zealot )

Summary/RP Tags:
-Marron's scandalous shoe heresy
-The Pomegranate Incident
-The Tale of a Boy and His Trees
-Prank me once, shame on you. Prank me twice, you're getting a book to the face...
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Comments: 25

Raakone [2017-11-28 23:29:40 +0000 UTC]

This is nice. Like this, and love the detail, especially the woman's sari!

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Art-Zealot In reply to Raakone [2017-11-30 05:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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birdmir [2016-04-11 02:49:42 +0000 UTC]

I always enjoy seeing scenes from rps. I'm digging the sepia you have here, it really sets it back in time, like we're looking at a memory. I'm also a fan of Tristine, so it's always good to see your art of her. ^v^

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Art-Zealot In reply to birdmir [2016-04-11 02:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Bird!

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Amazie-Star [2016-04-07 00:04:37 +0000 UTC]

"I fear I may’ve misjudged this fellow for two hundred years. He’s a good egg…!"
Matilda briefly wonders in what other ways can people be compared to baking ingredients. That aside, wonderful RP! ^^ I love the seeds of mischievous friendship between the two men, and I love how Tris is knowing enough to immediately disavow any responsibility. In short, great RP: thanks for sharing!

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Art-Zealot In reply to Amazie-Star [2016-04-07 02:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Amazie!

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Sekrain [2016-04-06 18:26:09 +0000 UTC]

How old is she?

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Art-Zealot In reply to Sekrain [2016-04-06 19:46:42 +0000 UTC]

Physically, she's 26, but she's been alive for 563 years. 

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Sekrain In reply to Art-Zealot [2016-04-07 16:17:51 +0000 UTC]

There are some lines on her face that makes her look older (not only in this drawing but in others too, except when she is on fire)

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Art-Zealot In reply to Sekrain [2016-04-07 21:01:51 +0000 UTC]

That's actually good to hear. I was worried I was making her look too young in a lot of other pictures. She's supposed to have the kind of face that's known its fair share of laugh lines, smiles, and stress—even before she came to the city.

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Sekrain In reply to Art-Zealot [2016-04-12 01:42:57 +0000 UTC]

I only remember her looking young when she is transformed (is that the correct term?), apart of that she lookd tired most of the drawings so I saw you nailed it

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Tasyne [2016-04-06 02:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Charming  
I love Tristine's dress. Vaguely reminds me of the game, Journey.

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Art-Zealot In reply to Tasyne [2016-04-06 07:35:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Tas!

Ahhh yeah, you're right! That game had some really beautiful Dravidian influences in its architecture!

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Leunbrund [2016-04-05 19:45:53 +0000 UTC]

There are worse things in the world, than being a conundrum...

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Art-Zealot In reply to Leunbrund [2016-04-05 22:37:19 +0000 UTC]

This is true.

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Leunbrund In reply to Art-Zealot [2016-04-05 23:04:56 +0000 UTC]

(Did I ever mention that I love you gave him little leg hairs? It seems like such a silly detail to enjoy but I do...)

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Art-Zealot In reply to Leunbrund [2016-04-06 01:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Those little ginger woolies. ;D

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Leunbrund In reply to Art-Zealot [2016-04-06 12:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhhh my lands. xD

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blogybo [2016-04-05 19:31:47 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Art-Zealot In reply to blogybo [2016-04-05 22:02:32 +0000 UTC]

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bluewitching [2016-04-05 15:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Ah bless, my fav Celt

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Art-Zealot In reply to bluewitching [2016-04-05 22:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Bless his face.

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bluewitching In reply to Art-Zealot [2016-04-05 23:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Bless this mess

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Garsna [2016-04-05 15:25:05 +0000 UTC]

*GESTURES AT THIS WHOLE THING*

This is wonderful Zeal! I love their expressions the best. You captured the both of them so well.

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Art-Zealot In reply to Garsna [2016-04-05 22:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, Gar!

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