yanni-must-die [2009-04-16 14:42:34 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Impact
I was immediately drawn to this photo. The contrast of the curves and straight lines is very appealing to my eye. The D O F is ok, and the slight vignette is also nice. I also like the contrast between the hard lines and the delicate.I do wish, however that the flag (I think it's a flag) at the top wasn't cut off, for me also a bit distracting. Since it was a still object, I would perhaps lower the iso and raise the f/ as high as possible to improve the D O F overall. I think that would encourage the eye to be drawn over the entire image, allowing it to be fully appreciated.
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ARTbunker In reply to yanni-must-die [2009-04-16 16:41:00 +0000 UTC]
Its actually a roof of the Olympia Stadium in Munich. No flag there. You may google it Thank you for the critique!
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Coldcry [2009-04-15 20:07:45 +0000 UTC]
At first I think it's a nice shot because:- The black and white effect is a good choice with sky without cloud.- The picture is simple and efficient.- The contrast is ok.- I think it's a kind of modern tower of Babel, like a human-made thing for climb up to the sky.But:- A little problem with the right side you cut the object just a few pixels too late, but it's not really important.-about the top of the background, why some dark corner ? With the idea of "mounted" some dark corner have to be at the bottom but also it's not really important and it's just a parasite effect.Finally it's really a great job, Congratulations.This kind of picture is exactly what I like to watch.
KatDiestel [2009-05-16 19:45:04 +0000 UTC]
ohhh, das olympiastadion !!
ARTbunker In reply to KatDiestel [2009-05-16 20:12:07 +0000 UTC]
yeo...genau
KatDiestel In reply to ARTbunker [2009-05-16 20:13:09 +0000 UTC]
viel schΓΆner als die arena
TheDeadwillExodus [2009-04-21 11:13:01 +0000 UTC]
Dig the perspective
ARTbunker In reply to TheDeadwillExodus [2009-04-22 09:57:27 +0000 UTC]
oh yes
AngelaxCollins [2009-04-21 09:08:49 +0000 UTC]
sexy
ARTbunker In reply to AngelaxCollins [2009-04-22 09:57:34 +0000 UTC]
sexy? where?
AngelaxCollins In reply to ARTbunker [2009-04-22 11:36:53 +0000 UTC]
the way it tapers into nothingis sexy
adean [2009-04-16 13:17:34 +0000 UTC]
Clear and simple
ARTbunker In reply to adean [2009-04-16 16:41:54 +0000 UTC]