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Published: 2009-01-29 01:43:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1319; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 18
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Description (Just because people seem to be getting the wrong idea, I will inform you ahead of time that this is NOT meant to be AschxLuke, though you can interpret it that way if you are so inclined. This is just Asch+Luke fluff that I wrote during math class, nothing more.)

“I said I don’t want to, dreck!”

Luke just laughed, taking hold of his original’s arm; Asch shook off his hands in disgust. “Come on, Asch. You said it was getting boring, and the sled goes twice as fast with two people on it!” The sun had dipped even closer to the horizon, and Luke peered across the hill at it anxiously. “Just once! Please?”

Asch grumbled something inaudible, a frown creasing his features and distorting the mirror image of the boy beside him. Idiot replica.

“... Please?”

With an aggravated sigh, Asch dropped down onto the sled, crossing his arms stubbornly. “Fine already! I’ll do it if you just shut up about it.”

A broad grin lit up Luke’s face and before Asch could blink he’d settled himself in his original’s lap. Asch, appalled, opened his mouth to protest but was cut off as Luke dug his feet into the snow on either side of the sled and pushed off.

The cold wind whipped at their hair and stung their cheeks as they smoothly accelerated down the slope of the hill. Luke, his eyes shut tight, let out a whoop that barely reached his ears before the wind tore it away. Behind him, Asch’s initial disapproval melted away as the thrill of adrenaline crept up his spine. He could feel something growing inside him, a sound, and as their ride caught a particularly steep patch of snow he felt it rising, and Asch couldn’t help it, he opened his mouth to laugh out loud…

Then, suddenly, he caught sight of something big and tall and brown looming up in front of them. “Luke! Look out!”

The boy in front of him started, but too late; the impact sent them both on a brief trip through the air before skidding to a tangled halt in the snow five feet away.

“Dammit, dreck!” Asch growled once he got his breath back, spitting the snow out of his mouth and glaring down at his replica.

“O-ow…” Luke whined, rubbing his head. “That hurt. Now get off me.”

“Gladly.” Asch pushed himself up and began to brush the snow off his clothes. I’ll be covered in bruises tomorrow… that idiot. He glanced around at said idiot to find him sitting there with a stupid smile on his face. “What’s wrong with you?”

“Oh… nothing.” Luke got to his feet, straightening his hat. “Come on, let’s get back then.”

“It’s about time,” Asch grumbled, retrieving the sled and stomping off towards the cabin.

Luke shook his head, but he was still smiling. The sun was setting now, casting brilliant rays across the white expanse of snow, but for once Luke didn’t notice. He…

“Well?” Asch turned impatiently. “Don’t just stand there, idiot.”

“All right, all right.” Luke hurried after him, feeling warm somehow despite the cold and the snow in his boots. Behind them, the sun slipped serenely below the horizon.

He called me Luke.

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Prompt: "A Day on the Mountain"

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Comments: 63

artemis-elric In reply to ??? [2011-07-10 21:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! I'm glad you think so

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Pein-and-Sakura In reply to artemis-elric [2011-07-11 17:42:22 +0000 UTC]

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HawkeyeRiza37 [2009-07-04 02:20:31 +0000 UTC]

This is BEYOND adorable! I hope it won't insult you that I take this in an AschxLuke fashion (course I'm just obsessed with that pairing...>< ) HOWEVER! Fodder for my love or not, I ADORE this picture AND the story that goes with it^^ Great work!

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artemis-elric In reply to HawkeyeRiza37 [2009-07-04 02:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I don't mind~ I do have a soft spot for AschxLuke.

And thank you!!

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SuperPankakes [2009-05-10 22:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I'm in love with the artwork and the story. s to you!

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artemis-elric In reply to SuperPankakes [2009-05-11 10:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. And thanks for the comment with the fav, a lot of people don't do that anymore... -sigh-

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SuperPankakes In reply to artemis-elric [2009-05-11 13:07:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha, Your welcome. And I know exactly what you mean.

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FSTA [2009-02-14 21:58:22 +0000 UTC]

How have I not seen/commented on this but I have on some of your most decrepit deviations?

I REALLY like the color in this. It's so...bright and happy. Not the best words...T_T They are ineffable! [that's a better word]

I'm in a favy kind of mood right now!

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artemis-elric In reply to FSTA [2009-02-14 22:00:33 +0000 UTC]

Beats me.

Thanks! This was another picture that I did right before the deadline (and it won the contest it was entered in, btw. But I think you knew that).

Ineffable is a good word.

Thanks again!

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FSTA In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-14 22:06:31 +0000 UTC]

Now, Now, no need to blush at the word "Ineffable." It's a modest word.

At least I think that's why you are blushing.

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artemis-elric In reply to FSTA [2009-02-14 22:26:27 +0000 UTC]



(Sorry, I just wanted an excuse to use that emote)

I like ineffable b/c it reminds me of one of my favorite books ~

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FSTA In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-15 03:33:48 +0000 UTC]

TEAM ROCKET'S BLASTING OFF AGAIN! ~twinkle~

I see that you've led me to inquire just what book that was.

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artemis-elric In reply to FSTA [2009-02-15 03:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Good Omens, by Terry Pratchett and Neil Gaiman.

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Sambul [2009-02-14 21:27:00 +0000 UTC]

OMFG This was so cute <3 The pic is great and the story makes it like 9000x better ^^ Asch and Luke's relationship is so adorable!

I swear this happens to me and my friend all the time. Except we use a plastic sheet instead of a sled and when im steering we hit a tree 9 out of 10 times xDDD

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artemis-elric In reply to Sambul [2009-02-14 21:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it.


Sounds painful. xD; I'm not so great at the whole steering thing either.

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Sambul In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-14 22:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Ur Welcome >w< Ive been wanting to see more ToA stuff around. LUke is way too cute for his own good. What did u color this with btw?
LoL maybe thats why my driving sux...xD if i cant steer a piece of plastic, im sure im doomed xD

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artemis-elric In reply to Sambul [2009-02-14 22:56:39 +0000 UTC]

I colored it with cheap markers. orz

Same here! My friend and I almost crashed twice on the way home from a convention.

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Sambul In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-15 04:45:20 +0000 UTC]

LoL! Thats still cool! I used crayola colored pencils way back when xD

Same! Actually on our way back me and my friends fell asleep in the car and our driver almost did too xD Sunday nights after cons suck.

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artemis-elric In reply to Sambul [2009-02-15 14:30:11 +0000 UTC]

I know... after days of no food (except sugar) and no sleep, driving home is not a very smart thing to do.

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Sambul In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-15 19:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Tell me about it -o-! Getting almost pulled over is no fun too. I seriously panic when that happens. *stares at icon* Guy! <333 He looks so cute there! *pinches cheeks XD*

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artemis-elric In reply to Sambul [2009-02-15 19:29:08 +0000 UTC]

I was worried that the police would be weirded out by having to arrest Iruka and Mello. xD;;

Thanks~ I had Asch and Luke before, but I changed it so I could do a collab.

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Sambul In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-21 09:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Jeez omg! ive been dead cuz i got ToVesperia <3333 So amazing >3<
lol just did 4 player ToA w. friends, in such a GuyxLuke mood!!!! O.O

ha, i love ur icon luke looks cute while complaining xD tho short haired luke is CUTER!~

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artemis-elric In reply to Sambul [2009-02-21 17:13:18 +0000 UTC]

Aaagh, you're so lucky!! I want to play that game so badly! >_<

GuyxLuke is the best, in my opinion. Cutest pairing ever! You saw my V-day pic, right?

I agree. Short-haired Luke is SO adorable I can't even stand it sometimes. x3

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Sambul In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-25 01:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww im sorry. ive been offline for a while just to play Vesperia *drool* YURI!!!! I dont have a 360 just borrowed it off of someone. Kinda sux that id only want one for ToV in the first place.

Apparently Short hair can turn anyone from asshole to sickeningly adorable uke boy. LoL yes ur v-day art is so cute xDDD God it reminds me of when Guy first waits for u when Luke cuts his hair. And when he says how he'll leave asch to go get Luke <333

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artemis-elric In reply to Sambul [2009-02-25 02:25:32 +0000 UTC]

I wish I knew someone who owned ToV. -sigh-

I love Guy for that. It's also why I'm not fond of Natalia. "Your best friend is right here." Ugh.

"He may be the real Luke, but my best friend is that idiot." Or something.

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Sambul In reply to artemis-elric [2009-03-04 00:59:54 +0000 UTC]

ha i have Vesperia <3 lol srry, i had to go through hell and back so that i could get it and borrow my friends 360 and other crap like that. But i finally beat it!!!11

I miss ToA so much. LoL i remember telling my friend about the game when i first got it. I was like "OmG OMG! So Im Playing this game and theres this guy named Guy, and he's afraid of women and stalks people through windows and is AMAZING!" xDDD My friend had a WTF face on lmao

Hee hee GuyxLuke makes me smile inside <33333

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artemis-elric In reply to Sambul [2009-03-04 01:52:38 +0000 UTC]

That is such a perfect description of Guy. My friend didn't seriously believe that he wore a collar until I showed her. xD


I need to submit more art. :\

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Sambul In reply to artemis-elric [2009-03-06 22:26:24 +0000 UTC]

IKR?! I love his green cat collar thingy! he's so cute <3 and he also happens to wear my fav color orange like my other fav characters *cough* raine xD

omg yes u do!!! xDDD More love to Abyss pl0x

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zelos22 [2009-02-03 07:40:45 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute lol. i love the expressions its perfect

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artemis-elric In reply to zelos22 [2009-02-03 10:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

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saichan1989 [2009-02-02 05:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Aww~ Cuuteee~ XD I love Luke's expression. And i like the story you added too ^_^ Great job!

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artemis-elric In reply to saichan1989 [2009-02-02 20:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I guess all that time drawing in math class was worth it after all.

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saichan1989 In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-03 03:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Math class? Wow! You are REALLY serious on this! Cool! I guess you deserved it too ^_^

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artemis-elric In reply to saichan1989 [2009-02-03 11:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Ah, it's nothing special. I draw all the time.

All. The. Time. =__=;

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saichan1989 In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-09 14:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on winning the competition!! Told ya you're gonna win! ^_^

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artemis-elric In reply to saichan1989 [2009-02-09 17:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, well, you got runner-up! I bet it was really close. ^^

But thank you~

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saichan1989 In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-10 15:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Yep. I got runner up, but a tie with the first entry... -__-" You're welcome dear! I'll add you to my watch. I shall learn more from the master!

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artemis-elric In reply to saichan1989 [2009-02-10 19:54:46 +0000 UTC]

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saichan1989 In reply to artemis-elric [2009-02-15 05:49:30 +0000 UTC]

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CinnaMonroe [2009-02-02 02:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Great passage and picture!! Asch and Luke are so much like brothers, even if ones a replica.

Great work! : )

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artemis-elric In reply to CinnaMonroe [2009-02-02 20:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I agree, they are very much like brothers. ^^

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1MonElisa1 [2009-01-30 21:28:23 +0000 UTC]

OMGGG SO CUTE!!!!!! *D*D* yo, I'm troubled now; which pairing is better?? I like the use of different colors for the reflections in the snow ^^ That was the cutest drabble ever.

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artemis-elric In reply to 1MonElisa1 [2009-01-30 21:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The different colors are simply because I thought it looked too empty.

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1MonElisa1 In reply to artemis-elric [2009-01-31 14:21:21 +0000 UTC]

It works I always wondered what to do with white spots; it's a really good idea

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nota-lone [2009-01-30 00:43:56 +0000 UTC]

This is a comment.

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artemis-elric In reply to nota-lone [2009-01-30 01:05:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you sooooo much for your generosity.

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Kurama-chan [2009-01-30 00:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Omg what a cute drawing! ^_^
I really liked how you did the pose!
You'll improve a lot with practice!

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artemis-elric In reply to Kurama-chan [2009-01-30 00:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the comment and the fav!!

I do hope I'll improve more soon... I certainly practice. All. The. Time.

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Kurama-chan In reply to artemis-elric [2009-01-30 15:30:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you will! ^_^

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XueLian [2009-01-29 02:03:34 +0000 UTC]

What did Molly say about this pairing again?
Oh yeah...




It's like masturbation!

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