ZedKalEios [2019-10-07 22:25:57 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
At first glance, I would not have grasped that this was a Dark take on the Delphox line. I think that is chiefly owed to how different you have depicted Fennekin(and to varying degrees Braixen and Delphox) with such a simple change in the down-turned ears combined with the palette swap. There is clearly no joy in Hallowed Fennekin's expression, and the casual disdain it holds is instead apparent at a glance.
Hallowed Braixen's ears and fur taking on the shape of the witch's hat is brilliant. Your choice of pose, in body language, conveys the confident and mischievous persona it has taken on, very ready and willing to cast its magic upon an unfortunate victim.
The delicate grip upon its wand also comes across a touch arrogant with the elevated pinkie, and combined with its expression one could view Hallowed Braixen as smugly condescending.
I love the way that you have turned the rest of the fur that would normally be rising upward and fluffy into the points of a dress.
If I had to critique you on anything with that design, it is that I feel you could have lightened the sclera just a few shades. I see that you kept the same tone on Hallowed Fennekin for the eyes as on the muzzle as well, but while it works with the lighter shade on Fenneki, I feel it is a touch too dark on Hallowed Braixen to look natural.
With Hallowed Delphox, the ears and hair melding together into a single piece is a nice touch. The overall shape of the dress has matured well from Braixen, though I would have liked to have seen more depth to the sleeves, because as it stands the arms just sort of attach to solid material rather than emerge properly.
I adore the mole you applied to the snout, reminiscent of the ugly witches I recall from my childhood. The soul-flames look sufficiently otherworldly and supernatural rather than proper fire, and I am delighted that you turned Braixen's wand into a broom.
In all, you had a great vision, you delivered strong technique in bringing your view to life, and it is original enough to stand on its own while paying respect to the canon species and the themes you intended for.
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Arteses-Canvas In reply to ZedKalEios [2019-10-08 00:12:03 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! i do agree i could've done better in the points you made, but im overall glad of what i made and im glad you are too! thanks again
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TEZofAllTrades [2019-10-07 21:10:46 +0000 UTC]
Awesome designs but if they aren't Psychic-type then I would guess they were Ghost e.g. Hex, Curse, Trick or Treat etc.
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