Comments: 25
NuttyNuti [2013-07-28 07:27:53 +0000 UTC]
Here we go!
The painting looks composed, and proportions here look well done. You mentioned that you let "eye feathers" out by purpose, and I do understand that drawing them all could have been quite a huge effort. Yet, now when the background is white, to me the lack of tail feathers is a bit too harshly visible. I get an impression like, "there is a spot light behind that birdie, and OH NO someone has plucked him!! DDDD:"
I think that black background with subtle hints of other tail feathers could have look better. Or, alternatively, painting more tail feathers so that they cover the picture like a web. ....hmmmm, to me the latter option sounds better. Anyway they idea would be that the viewer gets the impression of that we have a peacock with a whole tail and not with plucked one. I believe that the impression of plucked tail that I get comes from that the base of tail and the head are pretty dark and painted with intense colors, which imbalances the painting.
I hope that was helpful enough!
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mellieissogreen [2013-07-14 02:45:13 +0000 UTC]
This is such a beautiful painting and I agree, peacocks are one of the most beautiful and majestic birds alive. :3
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Gryffgirl [2013-07-13 17:09:28 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous colors!
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ljsraksha [2013-07-04 01:15:40 +0000 UTC]
very pretty, I love how you did the blue feathers
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Aquatic-Magic [2013-07-03 22:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh, that's soo pretty!
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