illeity [2015-06-15 02:41:11 +0000 UTC]
Good day! As part of Project-Comment , I'll be providing a comment. Please take whatever can help you become a better artist!>A nice dreamy little artwork of hanging eggs and turtles. It's of no thematic depth, but it's pleasing to look at; and sometimes that's all it needs. >Good subtle and gradual fading of the snow as it drifts down to the ground.>Lovely choice of muted colors. Reminiscent of winter approaching.>The turtle lacks any definition that would separate it from the bg. >Not much to say about an artwork that's still in progress, but you're headed in the right track.>Just be sure to define objects more concretely that you want your audience to focus on (add shades, darker colors, shadows, different colors around the subject, etc.)
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