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What's up guys, this is Irisa Teric, JSAB version:
Personality: Irisa's nice, easy-going, caring and nonchalant, she can help you with your problems and try to change you if what your doing is bad, she's calm in most situations, very clever, sneaky and intelligent.
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Love-interest: Noriaki Kakyoin (Note: She would wait for him to be her age)
Favorite: Cherries, shiny green and red
Hair color: Cherry red
Eye color: A brighter shade of cherry red
Rivals: Envious girls, fueled by jealousy and spite, embarked on a relentless mission to sabotage Irisa's relationship with Noriaki. Their malicious endeavors were shrouded in baseless accusations and deceptive tactics, as they attempted to poison Noriaki's perception of Irisa by fabricating lies about her character. Despite their concerted efforts to tarnish Irisa's reputation and manipulate those around them, their schemes only led to their own downfall. As their desperate actions escalated to include threats and manipulation, their social standing crumbled, leaving them isolated and scorned by their peers. Their misguided obsession even drove them to contemplate extreme measures, dreaming of harming Irisa, but their delusions only brought swift repercussions. Ultimately, their actions led to expulsion and mandatory therapy, showcasing the consequences of their destructive behavior. While they may have inflicted physical harm on Irisa, the scar left behind only served as a testament to her strength and resilience amidst adversity. (I used a sentence extender to see how it would look, also this was drawn on Krita)

What do you think?

Description
What's up guys, this is Irisa Teric, JSAB version:
Personality: Irisa's nice, easy-going, caring and nonchalant, she can help you with your problems and try to change you if what your doing is bad, she's calm in most situations, very clever, sneaky and intelligent.
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Love-interest: Noriaki Kakyoin (Note: She would wait for him to be her age)
Favorite: Cherries, shiny green and red
Hair color: Cherry red
Eye color: A brighter shade of cherry red
Rivals: Envious girls, fueled by jealousy and spite, embarked on a relentless mission to sabotage Irisa's relationship with Noriaki. Their malicious endeavors were shrouded in baseless accusations and deceptive tactics, as they attempted to poison Noriaki's perception of Irisa by fabricating lies about her character. Despite their concerted efforts to tarnish Irisa's reputation and manipulate those around them, their schemes only led to their own downfall. As their desperate actions escalated to include threats and manipulation, their social standing crumbled, leaving them isolated and scorned by their peers. Their misguided obsession even drove them to contemplate extreme measures, dreaming of harming Irisa, but their delusions only brought swift repercussions. Ultimately, their actions led to expulsion and mandatory therapy, showcasing the consequences of their destructive behavior. While they may have inflicted physical harm on Irisa, the scar left behind only served as a testament to her strength and resilience amidst adversity. (I used a sentence extender to see how it would look, also this was drawn on Krita)

What do you think?