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MReneeB [2014-10-04 20:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Ok, number one.... I have NO idea who Spawn is, just saying... loool

numero 2: its very good! you definitely improved on the shading (i see you took my advice into account ^^ ) another thing though about shading; (i learned this the hard way) you don't have to create a bunch of lines to shade against, in most cases you do cell block shading, not just against the line art but on large sections of the folds as well, where his body would be casting shadows or where the cloak is creating major folds or overlapping. same principal applies to his body

Numero 3: lmao his face XD sorry but it looks kinda like he's crying in anguish heeheehee. b/c of the green streaks .... flames... things? idk ... sorry... (i told you i don't know who Spawn is >____>' ) um... and for the size of the head, the shoulders are sliiiightly too narrow.

ok... sorry for all the criticism lool, I REALLY like how you made the eyes and the medal so shiny~! (i myself suck when it comes to that LOL, I'm actually going to post one of my OC's in about a couple of hours... almost done ^^) and the amount the detail you did in the folds of the cloak! OMG! you have infinite patience my friend! SO good! I also really like how you placed the fist, you are definitely improving with each piece! great work!

 

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