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MjaxMajoran [2015-05-05 18:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Vision - You have done very well to show what your title wishes to convey, the smile, relaxed muscles and facial expression as well as colors all contribute to the idea of peace, very well done!

Technique - This is a type of art style i cannot say i have seen before, it almost resembles watercolors mixed with crayons, and together it forms a very pleasing image for the eye, i was a bit confused as to the green reflections in the hair though.

Impact - It make's as much of an Impact as it intends to, a small and soft one, one that calms you when you see it, which is rare to achieve

In terms of originality, I only give you a lower grade since it's been done before, HOWEVER you put your own spin and talent into it which makes it worthy of being a high grade piece!

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Reach4Succes1995 [2015-04-29 21:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Vision – Your drawing does resemble the concept of peace well, with the way the girl is smiling in her sleep. The only minor flaw I have spotted in your drawing is that it looks like your drawing has been printed out, but the ink is starting to run out a bit.

Technique – The use of colors in your drawing are very vibrant and colorful. The anatomy of the girl is basic, but solid.

Impact – The girl looks very peaceful, as if she is in a slumber, and I'm guessing that her having both hands on her heart suggests that she's in love?

Deviousness – Total - 4/5 It's a simple but a very colorful and a pretty drawing to look at.

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ArtsyCantabile In reply to Reach4Succes1995 [2015-04-30 16:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks so much for the critique. I think I know the part you're talking about that looks like it was printed and the ink ran out... I had intended to make the background super light, and went a little darker accidentally on the left. Unfortunately, the picture I took didn't register the light coloration on the right... Since it's noticeable enough to be a flaw, I think I'll go back and darken it after all. It'll just look better that way, methinks.

Thank you so much again for the critique! I've been really hoping for one, I really appreciate it n ^__^

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Reach4Succes1995 In reply to ArtsyCantabile [2015-05-01 16:53:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Sachi-pon [2015-05-29 00:24:06 +0000 UTC]

i think this is so cute

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ArtsyCantabile In reply to Sachi-pon [2015-05-30 12:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! ^______^

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MjaxMajoran [2015-05-05 18:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Loved it, i gave a critique with some constructive feedback for you


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ArtsyCantabile In reply to MjaxMajoran [2015-05-06 16:00:04 +0000 UTC]

YAY! Thanks so much for the critique!!!! I greatly appreciate it! ^_^

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MjaxMajoran In reply to ArtsyCantabile [2015-05-06 17:12:06 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^v^

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TheStarlightPrincess [2015-05-04 08:15:27 +0000 UTC]

This is very lovely piece! I like the way how you kept it simple but still enough detailed that it's hard to look away from. What I really love in this peace is its relaxedness and peacefulness. It's not just in the picture you can also feel it for youself. ^^ Maybe you could have done the shadows on her skin a bit darker but otherwise this looks wonderful!

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ArtsyCantabile In reply to TheStarlightPrincess [2015-05-06 16:00:56 +0000 UTC]

W00t! Thanks so much for the comment! ^_^

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TheStarlightPrincess In reply to ArtsyCantabile [2015-05-06 18:23:24 +0000 UTC]

It was my pleasure! Β 

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Inky-Shade [2015-05-02 22:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful colors and wonderful design.
I really like her soft smile and the warm atmosphere this piece has.
Great work^^

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ArtsyCantabile In reply to Inky-Shade [2015-05-06 16:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Inky-Shade In reply to ArtsyCantabile [2015-05-07 13:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Welcome^^

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JaiStuart [2015-05-02 11:18:27 +0000 UTC]

On behalf ofΒ ProjectComment :

I really like the sense of calm this picture projects--its something I wish I felt more often Β I also love the use of soft colours here and respect what you have done with the copics, especially with the subtle shading in the skin tones. Β The shading in all of it is honestly perfect. Β If I could offer one improvement it would be a higher quality scan, or image--I think this might have been blown up from a lower res. Β I apologise if I'm wrong. Β Technique wise, I think you nailed it.

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ArtsyCantabile In reply to JaiStuart [2015-05-06 16:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I had taken a picture of it instead of scanning it, because the scanner wasn't reading the colors correctly. I'm going to try to take a higher quality picture of it later this week. Thank you so much for the feedback!

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JaiStuart In reply to ArtsyCantabile [2015-05-08 07:35:39 +0000 UTC]

No worries, good luck!

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DoubleDandE [2015-04-25 17:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done on this. I like how you colored and shaded everything. Everything looks to be in order, and her expression looks nice. Well don on this. Β 

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ArtsyCantabile In reply to DoubleDandE [2015-05-06 16:03:34 +0000 UTC]

β™‘ Thank you β™‘

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DoubleDandE In reply to ArtsyCantabile [2015-05-07 00:47:19 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.Β 

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StarlightHawk [2015-03-07 19:34:35 +0000 UTC]

I adore her expression!!! Β The colouring work on this is really great as well as the shading, it's amazing what people can do with copics.

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ArtsyCantabile In reply to StarlightHawk [2015-04-05 01:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thank you so much, StarlightHawk.

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StarlightHawk In reply to ArtsyCantabile [2015-04-07 04:44:57 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome, and it's well deserved!! Β (I mean look at it, it's awesome!)

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